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| Starapollo1 2008-08-03 ch 1,  | abuseLOL! I loved it! I think you did great with description and dialouge, I mean wow! This is defiantly one of the better stories I've read so far! |
| Cyanica 2008-07-15 ch 3, anon. | abuseI like this story! And I can't wait until Leah meets the Weasleys and Tonks! Keep updating this great fic! And I'll be watching for more chapters! |
| kairi6353 2008-07-14 ch 3, | abusehey chick. i'm luvin the story so far! i noticed it's kinda been a while since u updated though... update soon plz! |
| Padfoot-Banshee 2008-05-30 ch 3, | abuseSo, I really love this chapter. Andy & Ted! That is so awesome. But, you know I bet Andy never really thought about hating her family untill she was a teenager, at least. When your a kid you tend to believe what your parents tell you, and if you've had the same thing beaten into your head since you were born (Mudbloods are evil! Purebloods rule the world!) your going to tend to belive it untill someone changes your mind. Espically since her older sister Bellatrix belived it so pasionatly. The Marauders shanged Sirius' mind, & Ted changed Andy's. Also, Narcissa is a flower, not a star. JK Rowling always called her Narcissa & when she decided to make all the Blacks stars, she enbded up just leaving Narcissa the same. Okay so I think I've rambled on long enough (If you haven't uessed, I LOVE the Blacks). I love the way your taking this story. Keep up the good work! |
| Lorel-ice-bear 2008-05-27 ch 2, anon. | abusePretty darn cool! I love how you have Dumbledore being the great awe inspiring headmaster but having Leah/Tantina having little funny coments about him! Keep up the totally awesome work! |
| TheScarletSerpent 2008-05-15 ch 2, | abusehey i like it please update soon |
| Of-butterbeer-and-frogs 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseVery creative. I'm likin it so far. I can't wait to see how the plot progresses; it's bound to be interesting. And Miss Smithy is a really cool last name, by the way ;) Keep up the great work. Cheers! |
| Padfoot-Banshee 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseOkay, well it starts nice. I'm going to assume that when she was thrown against the wall, it was being a witch that caused her not to get more seriously injured. There were some grammer mistakes and stuff, but all in all real good. However, she seems a bit mature for ten. I ralize that, living with an abusive alcoholic father, would cause someone to grow up quickly, & I remember thinking I was totally mature at ten, but really kids are just more innocent then. Also if a beer bottle hit her, shards would cut her and stuff. Again, maybe the magical blood helped her out. But all in all I like it. -Pads |