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| Jessa7 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abusevery sad...and unfortunately the way i reckon they'll take Rose away again. But it's a wonderful bit of writing. |
| marleah 2008-05-21 ch 1, | abuseI. loved. this. "He never believed in fairytales, and her heart's too broken to try." Beautiful. |
| Uh.yeah 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseBreaking. My. Heart. How cruel of you. But cruel in a rather beautiful, poetic away. And with the "oh, clever" factor thrown in at the end, heh. I think every word in this was perfectly placed, and I liked where you chose to split it. I think it worked well. And lines like, "She can’t look at him, he can’t take his eyes off her, and he wonders how he ever got along without her." were painful, but scarily right. Nice. |
| The Chibi's Are Stalking Me 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseSHINEY!! *^_^* ((But then, yours tend to be...)) |
| Kates Master 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseBeutiful. And that's all that can be said, really. Keep writting. Emma |
| hurting-angel 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abusev. good. Loved it (I was thinking this aswell) :) |
| Kathryn Shadow 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseNow you've gone and made me want to cry. Curse you. -runs away sobbing- |
| Duchessa of Bellezza 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuse... *disolves into sobs* |
| Zebidee 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseWow, Great oneshot =) |