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Reviews For: Beautiful Lie

Jessa7
2008-06-16
ch 1,
abusevery sad...and unfortunately the way i reckon they'll take Rose away again. But it's a wonderful bit of writing.
marleah
2008-05-21
ch 1,
abuseI. loved. this. "He never believed in fairytales, and her heart's too broken to try."

Beautiful.
Uh.yeah
2008-05-20
ch 1,
abuseBreaking. My. Heart.
How cruel of you. But cruel in a rather beautiful, poetic away. And with the "oh, clever" factor thrown in at the end, heh. I think every word in this was perfectly placed, and I liked where you chose to split it. I think it worked well. And lines like, "She can’t look at him, he can’t take his eyes off her, and he wonders how he ever got along without her." were painful, but scarily right. Nice.
The Chibi's Are Stalking Me
2008-05-16
ch 1,
abuseSHINEY!! *^_^*

((But then, yours tend to be...))
Kates Master
2008-05-15
ch 1,
abuseBeutiful.

And that's all that can be said, really.
Keep writting.
Emma
hurting-angel
2008-05-10
ch 1,
abusev. good. Loved it (I was thinking this aswell) :)
Kathryn Shadow
2008-05-10
ch 1,
abuseNow you've gone and made me want to cry. Curse you. -runs away sobbing-
Duchessa of Bellezza
2008-05-10
ch 1,
abuse...

*disolves into sobs*
Zebidee
2008-05-10
ch 1,
abuseWow, Great oneshot =)
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