Man that's most awesome 1. chapter for a fan fiction with Grievous I ever read! I really hope that you will continue this story, please do it, I already love it! A happy new year!
Sarla

I really enjoyed reading this chapter! Since Clone Wars is on TV now I feel my love for SW coming back... please update this story, I really like'd to see more of it!

great story
love Grievous

You should continue this! It's very good! I would definately like to read more.

Wow a promising first chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Wow this chapter is pure awesomeness! Please update or I will cry!

Awesome.
I like where you're going with this.
Update soon?
We need more Grievous ficcys!

You win at life. Please update.

this is awsomely written dashi! update soon!

Really, write it soon =) (I can't stop thinking about that first chapter xD) And I'm sorry if I scare you with my enthusiasm.

Hey, that beginning is VERY interesting. You write so well! I love it! Update soon, I want to read the next chapter! =D