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| JustCallMeMarly 2008-09-26 ch 1, | abuseWow. I really liked this. Thanks for posting. Very heartwarming... |
| none 2008-07-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! That was so lovely! |
| AK-tiger 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseMORE PLZ! |
| ImSoMMAD 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was ABOSLUTELY GORGEOUS! I'll welling up, I really am! It's so cute, and so unbelievably them, and I just can't help grinning and crying at the same time. It's beautiful, and totlly in character and just...lovely. You can probably tell my adjective list is running low. I love it anyway, I hope that says it all. Please please please write again soon! It's all the better because I saw that episode on Saturday, so I actually know what you're talking about! Yey! xxStellaxx |
| TessaStarDean 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseI'm not a big Mac/Stella shipper, but this was very well-done and very believable. Nice work! |
| lily moonlight 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed reading this, and I think you have a wonderful empathy with both characters. It was a pleasure to read, and I could picture them both, each moment between them beautifully described from all the details of Stella 'muffled against his collar' and Mac, 'like a spring, stretched to his limit'. I also liked the narrative from Stella's point of view, knowing and seeing the details of Mac. It began so sadly, and still, and then ended in hope and movement. Lovely. |
| CherryLove23 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseAmazing |
| Crazy Mokis 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseIt's great to read about Mac out of his formal behaviour. It's a great little fanfic. Love it! |
| Maja16 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseWow, awesome. GREAT story, I love it. It would be soo great if this really happened in the episode. Great job;) |
| tv-matchmaker 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseaw... this was really nice and well written. Actually my fave part was : Yeah.” He looks down at the traffic far below us. “I would have killed Frankie.” My brow furrows. “Well...I did.” I think coz I could fully see Stella looking at him, brows furrowd, if you will. And its made even better with Macs confession afterwards!! great job! |
| shawdoo 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseI can't even begin to describe how much I love your writing. You capture Mac and Stella, their feelings, their friendship and their whole intimate connection so perfectly. I's so happy you posted another story. I hope more will be coming soon. |
| shopping-luva91 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful! You're my fave CSI NY author. Great work. I loved it! |
| Moska 2008-05-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseThank Goodness for you and your writings, BT... So much need and sensuality wrapped up in a few words of perfection. You truly see this pair for whom they are. Love this. |