you probly wont write anymore but i still will hope

there are a few things wrong with it but its a good story

Okay I absolutely, positively HATE your story. I can't believe I read this far. I just can't. ALL the characters are really OOC. Fang would not just abandon the flock for Max, yeah, I know he really likes her, but be realistic! Imprinting is not that mushy, the person who gets imprinted on doesn't automatically have fuzzy feelings for the imprintor! Jacob isn't that squealy and OMG like. And Leah would probably love the person she imprinted on, but still feel a little awkward around him. Alice is just... not Alice.
Congrats. You got a flame.

I love this story!

Please write more, it's really good.

i had to read that but. its about when ares steals zeuses thunder bolt

Update already!! I want to know what happens next! Idulge me, I'm begging you. **SuckerForTwilight**

Write more!! Pretty please? Don't blame ME for not reviewing, I only discovered your story twenty minutes ago, and would sure as hell have reviewed if I had read it as you posted. Please? I'll give you a whole basket of cyber-cookies. (Ha! I said cookies! I'm turning into an American! Freak out!) Look, I'll even critique... uhm... oh, got it! Use spell check. Please please please. Use spell check. There. Happy? Just puh-lease keep writing! }TwilightRoxMySox{

Please update! I really enjoyed reading this story, and I think you have a great plot! I cannot wait to find out what happens!

Hey, that is AWESOME! I love this story lots! A+ so far! Keep it up!
~`*MB*`~

ok, this is my first ever flame. i don't mean to be kinda mean, but the characters act like complete idiots at times. (sorry...) i mean angel and gazzy's conversation:
'they're vampires'
'ok, cool'
'night'
'night'
i mean come on!? and fang wouldn't be all:
'ok, i'll explain it to you just like that, even when you seem like the enemy.'
it took them ages to even tell annie they had wings. they didnt even use their real names! but fang just automatically gives up their secret!? you've made them a bit too trusting. sorry about how this sounds, but i really feel like i should tell you. it's an awesome story with an awesome plot.
(PS is it just me, or does laeh seem a bit soft, ven for the whole imprinting thing? (which is an awesome pairing, by the way))

sorry,

Nudge is black.

So he wouldn't have recognized her, at all.

AH! DO U REALIZE WHAT KIND OF CLIFFHANGER U JUST WROTE? LOL. nice story. i really like it...please continue!
~Hawkflyer667

sorry i didnt review last time i havant been on in a long time.i still love your storry so dont change things.
write on
-rose

i don't hate your story.

3 days grace isn't emo...much. Hey, I like a few of their songs. They're not bad.

Bait is the only use for Bella. Am I the only one who has noticed this? Not just in your fic, but in the real books as well. Always teh live bait.