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darl
2008-05-31 . chapter 2
Very intriguing! I've only started to like Sai since I began reading your fanfiction. And Sakura is great - there seem to be some complex past dynamics among her, Sasuke and Naruto? But I like that she does not appear to be leaning on them. I'm quite curious as to what is going to happen next!

Thank you!


-liuxing
Nightside Guardian
2008-05-26 . chapter 2
Love your story! ^_^
ArjunaAnja
2008-05-13 . chapter 2
this sounds real good hope you continue it.
Sear
2008-05-11 . chapter 1
Yup, already read Bluescreen, and it is awesome. It's a good fic, but the sci-fi parts really made it, I love the whole present-but-not-really-described world she's created - that acid/poisonous rain was just beautiful.
Your description of almostandroid!Sai reminded me of Bluescreen's androids actually.
I dindn't really comment on any deatils when I reviewed earlier - I was too excited. But that Sain-in-italics thing at the end of the chapters is beautiful. I like your Sakura, also, for once she isn't either ** or **, the way she's often portrayed with all the bashing and stuff...
Sear
2008-05-10 . chapter 2
This is so much love. My first true love when it comes to reading is fantasy, the second is science-fiction - why? It's escapism at its best, and good fantasy and sf will also experiment, innovate and explore human nature and society. Like your explanations of the bijuu - and I'd love to read the list, a mix of old deities, new technologies and genetic manipulasion sounds verily interesting.
Something needs to best said about your Sakura and Sai, too. They're awesome togheter.
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