   lovemahBF 12/27/11 . chapter 7awwww I loved it |
| Ookami-Ryuu 11/27/11 . chapter 7 Cute story. I feel bad for Kakashi though. He must have wondered were the boys disappeared.
/Dragonwolf |
| fateHASu 6/30/11 . chapter 7 BEAUTIFUL *sob* STORY! *sniffs * :..) |
| nanacontrol 8/13/10 . chapter 7 Erm, how could I have NOT reviewed this story? o.0 I like it sooo much! 3 I love Naruto and Sasuke (as a couple of course XD)! |
| KanaPetrsr323 7/25/10 . chapter 7 YAOI YAOI YAOI! Gahh! i lv it so beauty and ordinary LUV IT! thank for writing this, you made my day |
| whitetigerofthenight321 6/11/10 . chapter 7 ok, um... this story? LOVE IT! it's one of the sweetest things I have ever read! AWWWWWW! _
the only thing that I would have to say is that you should make sure you read through what you wrote, because there are some minor grammar and spelling errors. DON'T PANIC! this doesn't make you a bad writer! im not saying that at all! sometimes you just get to typing and your hands just fly to fast and you either miss a letter or add a random symbol. god knows how many times ive done it. all in all, a really, really good story. I enjoyed it immensely. i hope i didnt offend you, i just wanted to help out a fellow writer. _ |
| meluvblue 5/23/09 . chapter 7 aww...very sweet, cute story, good job! . |
| Mrs Hatake Itachi 12/30/08 . chapter 7 Nice story! |
| noname00 9/23/08 . chapter 7 Gosh, I couldn't stop laughing when Minato forgot that he married them the day before anyways the fic was great, and im so glad that I finally gave it a shot |
| MrsHellman 9/20/08 . chapter 7 HELLO! Long time no see! :glomp: I liked this story but in some parts it was unrealistic and it was so rushed, I'm a SasuNaru fangirl and I'm sold when it comes to Mermen fics, lol ;P I love them so much! Anyway! Something's been botherin me though. . . it has nothing to do with you rstory though, it's about yaoi mermen couple in general. . . how the hell do they have sex? O.o
mi |
| Jiraya Junior 9/10/08 . chapter 7 If only Itachi was really that nice.
Though he's dead now. |
| redfoxmoon 9/8/08 . chapter 7 Wow- I loved the part when Minato said they had to get married adn he forgot they already had the day before. |
| Crazy PurpleSage 9/7/08 . chapter 7 Aw! Yay! That was so great. I loved the wedding ceremony, and how Sasuke wouldn't let go of Naruto, and Sasuke and Naruto's love to each other for each other shown through their tears. And then how cute they looked waking up with each other, and then the happy ending.
Oh, I just loved it all. Great story! I can't wait to read your next one. Good luck with it. ;D |
| Hearts4Cloud 9/7/08 . chapter 7 *sniff* beautiful *sniff sniff* |
| Jugoya 9/5/08 . chapter 7 Aw... (3)
love the ending(3)
It's just to perfect(.)
And now it's just to wait to the other story of yours are coming out |
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