awesome!

great fic!

Oh, wow! Very well written, and I really liked it. (: MC was just AWESOME! lol.

Great job! (:

Beautiful. You managed to keep them true to their characters while still giving them the playful banter that comes with long familiarity.

I always hold to the idea that while Dark Ace respects Cyclonis's power, he is not living in any sort of fear of her. The actions of the pilot episode bear witness to the fact that his loyalty stems from something more substantial than fear.

Great job. I look forward to more from you.