Reviews for Of the Species

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ChiokoxxLat 2008-06-29 ch 6,	abuseHoly crap... Wow, I've never been so interested in a story like this! You connected everything so well, I'm very impressed! I swear, if you turned this into a novel, I'd buy it :D But yeah...Random instinct-sex? Very nice. I like that you made it only ON spider instinct rather than love..I adore writers who do that :] Keep going!
Harlequin Jade 2008-06-20 ch 6,	abuseThis just keeps getting more interesting... I like it!
firedraygon 2008-06-20 ch 6,	abusePoor Harry -- he's so confused and Norman's a bastard who understands how to use this to his advantage. Haha, Peter's reaction is pretty amusing. Not outraged, just kind of, "Hmm, I didn't plan on losing my virginity this way, but...oh well." Nice work with this. I'm looking forward to Peter's infiltration attempt! Please write more soon! ~fd97
Harlequin Jade 2008-06-10 ch 5,	abuseDamn. I so wanna read more! please update again soon!
Yin7 2008-06-09 ch 5,	abuseSpider insticts kicking in.
firedraygon 2008-06-09 ch 5,	abusecackles I was so waiting for this moment. He, and the whole cannibalism thing -- wonderful! Glad Harry stopped before taking a bite though. >__>; I'm sure Peter appreciated it. Norman's plan isn't perfect though! Harry might feel guilty for almost eating his, er, 'mate' but Peter's not going to let him feel alienated. XD Lovely work. Please write more soon! ~fd97
Ice Dragon3 2008-06-09 ch 5,	abuseYou know, halfway through when you mentioned how Harry exhibited more instictive behavior than Peter, I felt compelled to stop reading this and do some research on spider behavior. Just because I'm a dork like that and you sparked my curiosity. So now I know about how spiders have a female-empowered society, as the males are usually smaller. And I read some about spider cannabalism... You know, sometimes the males bring food to the female as a bribe, as a stuffed spider will be less likely to eat her mate...perhaps Peter should buy Harry dinner first the next time? XD All the spider facts were very entertaining to read, thank you for inspiring that bout of knowledge harvesting. And your chapter itself was a delight to read! Harry and Peter's meeting did follow the more instict-driven logic and simplier courting methods of spiders. I just wonder, now that the spider genes in Peter and Harry have complicated their relationship, how their 'human' sides will learn to cope with the sudden shift. Norman is so devious!
Emeralden Rapley 2008-06-09 ch 4,	abusei like but i just thought of something, how is it gonna be P/H if Norman is trying to get Harry to kill peter. and when you said a sad ending, did you mean all around or just for certain character's like Norman. cause harry and peter hardly ever get a happy ending unless it happy, yet sad like you mentioned or was that a different author. well anyway i just wanted to ask cause i was trying to see the scenario but i just can't. well i guess i'll have to wait and see. oh well. anywho sorry for the wierd update i have morning brain. im a little slow.
Yin7 2008-06-07 ch 4,	abuseThis is really good. More updates.
firedraygon 2008-06-07 ch 4,	abuseXD Do you smell something, huh? Nice to know Harry'll figure out that Peter's been in his room through his stuff. I wonder how that'll blow over. Norman's such a bastard. D: Manipulating everyone like that. Good luck, Peter! Please write more soon! ~fd97
Ice Dragon3 2008-06-07 ch 4,	abusePoor Peter, he's really going out of his mind about Harry's disappearance. The worst part is, is that Peter still has no clue about Norman being the Green Goblin, and yet Norman knows Peter's identity. It gives Norman a huge advantage on the playing field. Peter's spider senses make him leery of Norman's nonchalance when questioned of Harry's disappearance, yet his 'human common sense' makes him refute that instinctive distrust. He thinks that Norman's cold but not a terrible guy, and because of that Peter's not defensive enough around that man. I really wonder what Harry's return home will be like, hopefully Peter and Harry will talk, and some sort of understanding of the true situation will happen. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Crystal Cat-chan 2008-06-07 ch 4,	abuseWhat does Harry smell? Poor Peter, if he sends him home and Harry finds Peter in his bed, I wonder what the reaction will be...HUm...Poor Harry. Norman is an as. I hope that once Harry gets that one day, Peter will be able to figure out what is going on, or Harry will tell him. Poor Harry needs a break!
Armida 2008-06-06 ch 3,	abuseThis is so intriguing, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Emeralden Rapley 2008-06-04 ch 3,	abusei like it so far. peter/harry slash is so cute. you go you awesome writer you this is gonna be just as good as death and the goblin. i mean dark fics are kewl but i have to know is this gonna be a hppy ending type cause i need to prepare myself if it is not so please get back to me on that and i hope gets whats comming to him.
firedraygon 2008-06-04 ch 3,	abuseGahh, I'm so impatient. XDD; Can't wait for Peter to find Harry, though I hope Harry hasn't developed any female spider tendancies, like eating the males after mating. >__> I love Harry experimenting with his webbing. So cute. Please do write more soon! ~fd97

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