|Reviews for One Moment|
| Muse Dae 10/8/12 . chapter 1
268 words and you gave me goosebumps and brought a few tears to my eyes. Ugh, my heart.
| Elie Lou 12/1/11 . chapter 1
But they do have a happy ending !
Fluffy but still quite simple, i like it !
| PinkLeopard 1/12/11 . chapter 1
This is beautifully crafted. I love your use of words to describe emotion. There is an old writing tip: "Show, don't tell" and you were able to do this perfectly.
I hope your compliments/critiques can be passed on to my work
Author of Voyage of the Heart by Artemis Nyx
| The North Wyn 9/30/08 . chapter 1
Fantastic! I think you nailed the scene perfectly. Very sweet. Good job.
| SpiritOfSherwood 8/6/08 . chapter 1
My favourite bit of Robin Hood EVER and you captured it perfectly! I feel like a terrible writer now. Well done!
| Really Not Here Anymore 6/6/08 . chapter 1
Becky, Becky, Becky... if, one day, you are not a published author or a script writer, or something, there is great in-justice in the world.
You really get inside characters' heads, and make everything you write so beautifully beLievable that I feel completely inferior right now...
But never mind.
It was lovely.
Have to go, Djaq needs to speak to Will! :)
| Glorious Clio 5/13/08 . chapter 1
Ooh, excellent! And good eye, I hadn't realized that they would have had the same first/last kiss. Great job!
| WishfulTrance 5/11/08 . chapter 1
you made me cry. that was so beautiful! if the BBC don;t bring back Will/Djaq to England and get them married and through the war with gorgous children, i'll KILL THEM. Hear that? KILL THEM!
i have to go now, otherwise i'll be late for a wedding. groans. GREAT STORY!
| emoras 5/10/08 . chapter 1
Wow that is such pure beautiful, lovely unashamed fluff! And i enjoyed reading every second of it! I think that's a great moment that passes between them, Djaq so bold, Will savouring the moment after, so cute!
| Esmerelda Diana Parker 5/10/08 . chapter 1
| Biancaneve 5/10/08 . chapter 1
Aww that was gorgeous. You captured that moment so well, the sense of sadness and finality in their first kiss, that I had to keep reminding myself as I read that they don't *actually* die, just to keep from sniffing. Bravo!