268 words and you gave me goosebumps and brought a few tears to my eyes. Ugh, my heart.

But they do have a happy ending !

Fluffy but still quite simple, i like it !

This is beautifully crafted. I love your use of words to describe emotion. There is an old writing tip: "Show, don't tell" and you were able to do this perfectly.

I hope your compliments/critiques can be passed on to my work

Darrine/PinkLeopard

Author of Voyage of the Heart by Artemis Nyx

Fantastic! I think you nailed the scene perfectly. Very sweet. Good job.

My favourite bit of Robin Hood EVER and you captured it perfectly! I feel like a terrible writer now. Well done!

The Spirit

Becky, Becky, Becky... if, one day, you are not a published author or a script writer, or something, there is great in-justice in the world.

You really get inside characters' heads, and make everything you write so beautifully beLievable that I feel completely inferior right now...

But never mind.

It was lovely.

Have to go, Djaq needs to speak to Will! :)

Amy x

Ooh, excellent! And good eye, I hadn't realized that they would have had the same first/last kiss. Great job!

you made me cry. that was so beautiful! if the BBC don;t bring back Will/Djaq to England and get them married and through the war with gorgous children, i'll KILL THEM. Hear that? KILL THEM!

i have to go now, otherwise i'll be late for a wedding. groans. GREAT STORY!

CF xx

Wow that is such pure beautiful, lovely unashamed fluff! And i enjoyed reading every second of it! I think that's a great moment that passes between them, Djaq so bold, Will savouring the moment after, so cute!

Loved it!

Loved it...

Aww that was gorgeous. You captured that moment so well, the sense of sadness and finality in their first kiss, that I had to keep reminding myself as I read that they don't *actually* die, just to keep from sniffing. Bravo!