This was a sweet story. Even if you don't finish this this was a great ending. :)

Love,
Invader Jay

awesome chapter, I especially liked the scene where Edgar was praying... Its hard to show religion without ticking me off, but you did it.

And now I really want to know why Tess was so depressed... And what Edgar will think of it.

Nifty. They really make a cute couple! Wow, Tess has low self -asteem(SP?). Edgar's can be quite the charmer when he wants to be.
Update soon!

This is a great chapter in a great story. Please update soon.

... It can't stop here. Please tell me you'll update within the next year? (I'm a patient person. And some things are definitely worth waiting for.)

I like the way you portray Tess's lonelyness--she feels so real
please write more soon, and might I suggest a cameo?
perhaps Nny himself?

Hey, a Tess fic, how rare. I think you have Tess extremely in character, so good job on that. Edgar on the other hand seems a little over-confident. I like him, but he seems ooc.

I love it! GIVE ME MORE. >=)

I'm going to make a Devi X Johnny soon.