Wow! You do a really good job writing about WWII in Asia. This one reminds me a lot about the first few scenes in "Grave of the Fireflies". Another thing you''re good at, Skye, is details. You choose the key points, but you don't over-describe a terrible scene like this. The way you talked about the blood was the best. I was drawn to the horror without the gore. I like the ending a lot.

Very powerful.

Wow. This is amazing. This is a brilliant recount of this time and the events that took place in Hiroshima and Nagasaki. It recalls an account of the bombings that I read in 5th grade. That seriously scarred me. This is a great story, I'm only sad it has so few reviews!! ;)

I loved this. It left me speachless at the end. I haven't read a one-shot like this based on the bombing, and it was correct, and moving at the same time. you wrote it beautifully =)

A-MAZ-ING. Truly a superb story! The description was so vivid i felt like i was there! You did an excellent job. Just wondering though, this is a oneshot, right? You could make it into a full story if you wanted to.

this is an awesome oneshot; you cant find stories like this these days, since Inuyasha is such an old manga/anime and everyone switched their interest from Inuyasha to Naruto. But great job!

Kimiko =D

very powerful peace. very well written.