Reviews for A serpent and The Philosophers Stone

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HarryPotterlovesus 2008-08-02 ch 13, anon.	abuseEr..no offense but your spelling is..well...completely dreadful! Sorry
Myene 2008-07-16 ch 18,	abuseGood story overall, but you have typos all over the place! Just do a re-read of each chappie, you'll find most of them. Most times its things like 'tot he' or the like.
Myene 2008-07-15 ch 1,	abuseIntresting start, but you have a great many typos, like, "ont he" or "wrk"
Fantasyfan4ever 2008-07-06 ch 18,	abusewhoops I alwasy enjoyed AUs on the Marauders and company reading the HP series, but this was definetly the best one I have ever read! It's so cool to see all the parents freaking out, scolding, etc. The commentary was brillant as well as the "punishments." The ending was brillant. Well, I'm off to read the sequel; wonderful job once again!
so you know... 2008-06-28 ch 3, anon.	abusePsst! If you're setting this story while Snape is still a student, then it would be during the mid 1970s. During the 1970s computers were not small. They were huge and very few people had computers, let alone ones with games on them. Most people didn't even have Atari videogame consoles until the late 1970s and early 1980s. And handheld videogames didn't really become widespread until the early 1990s. So Snape should be nearly as puzzled by the "computer games" as the purebloods are (or at least surprised and amazed), despite having a muggle for a father.
Gryffindor for eva' 2008-06-28 ch 18,	abusePlease update! I'm dying here!
Slayer3 2008-06-19 ch 18, anon.	abuseWell...hm...intersting...verdy verdy intersting...I have enjoyed this story although my canon-nazi self really wishes someone would write a story similar to yours where everyone is in characater, not that your characters arent,its just the whole Malfoys being nice, and never mind Narcissa whos a freakin Black for Merlins sake...just suddenly chucks the whole Purebloods R the best everyo ne else is pond scum and should be eliminated thing...other than that its good...:-D And dont get me started on said creppy relationship btween Lucius and Snape..*shudders...lol Slayer,the completly obsesed fangirl IMSGST And Sue Squad member
Slayer3 2008-06-18 ch 17, anon.	abuseDun Dun dun... Slayer,the completly obsessed fangirl IMSGSET and Sue Squad member
Slayer3 2008-06-18 ch 16, anon.	abuseYes yes yes we all know Snapes good in the end...But he still had his flaws...please dont turn him into a puddle of mush..I happen to love the snarky, sarcastic Potions Master tyvm..not the lover-of-bunnies-and-flowers(no pun intend lol hehehehehehehehehehehehe ahem ) some idiot Suethors make him out to be...same goes for Malfoy..:-D Slayer the completly obsesed fangirl IMSGSET and Sue Squad member
Slayer3 2008-06-18 ch 15, anon.	abuseOh great..more implied slash...*sighs atleast this time it was funny..poor Moony lol... Slayer,the completly obsesed fangirl IMSGET And Sue Squad member
Slayer3 2008-06-18 ch 14, anon.	abuseHm...verdy interesting... Although I love this new Malfoy/Black thing, they would never act like that in canon but whatever..:-D Slayer,the completly obsessed fangirl IMSGSET and Sue Squad member
Slayer3 2008-06-17 ch 13, anon.	abusehm the plot thickens Slayer,the completly obsessed fangirl IMSGSET and Sue Squad member
Slayer3 2008-06-17 ch 12, anon.	abuseWow...intersting...Hmm...I know Snapes not evil and stuff..but the whole Lucius/Snape thign is a little creeppy...Bordering on the OOC, but not too much...just be a little more careful with the characterization...Yes i think they were friends but the language you used implied something else...unless you wanted to imply something which would be umm well anyway...on to the next chapter.. Slayer,the completly obsesed fangirl IMSGSET and Sue Squad member
Veela-Lily 2008-06-17 ch 18,	abuseGenius! Absolutely genius! I’ve lost all my words – I can’t say what I like more in those two last chapters, cause I like everything! I really hope we’ll see the next book reading by the same lot very soon! (And I’d also like to know, how they spent their week, keeping in mind their new warm relationship :). Please, update soon! P.S. James’s and Sirius’s appearance when they left a room was priceless! :)
HAFTKAKHALEB 2008-06-16 ch 18,	abuseok now I havent reviewed in AGES because no books have been sorta worthy of it but your was fantastic and I hope you write the next one soon and start the first chapter off not as a book but how they are going and stuff that would be great

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