LOVE THIS STORY AND IT IS AWESOME.
PS IT IS ALSO HILARIOUS.
SO PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE THE NEXT BOOK.

like how Lucius reacted to what his son was saying to Harry

I like it :)

great story

gave me a bit of an idea

a history teacher (OC Character) at hogwarts gets the harry books

and proceeds to rwad future text rather than past

umm there is alot of spelling errors an the like...

i am tempted to ask to fix it up...

still as said even with the errors i enjoyed reading this... on to book 2

you need to learn how to spell

Love the story, Hope you'll uploads the story soon, I want to know what happen next in the story. So Please update the story ASAP.

i was wondering what happen to the dresses and make up lol lol lol

brilliant! i particularly loved Snape's reaction to the description of his overgrown bat-like appearance!

There was a lot of spelling errors but the story is funny and has potential.

you've spelled 'maybe' wrong.

Wow... Just WOW. I didn't think it could get worse, but it did! I can't read another chapter, this is one of the worst written stories I have ever read, sorry but I'm being honest.

I have never read a fanfiction with worse spelling than that! It was horrible! You didn't even spell Lily right and she's a main character! This is a horribly written story, WAYYYYYY too much yelling and so many spelling mistakes it was hard to understand!

so very well written this here story is

from start 2 finish so damn awesome

I understand that you are using the British version of the book, but the poor spelling is VERY distracting.