|Reviews for A serpent and The Philosophers Stone|
| Lizabeth Black 7/24/12 . chapter 18
LOVE THIS STORY AND IT IS AWESOME.
PS IT IS ALSO HILARIOUS.
SO PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE THE NEXT BOOK.
| Gracfully 7/24/12 . chapter 6
like how Lucius reacted to what his son was saying to Harry
| Gracfully 7/24/12 . chapter 3
I like it :)
| Ashleythetiger 3/4/12 . chapter 18
gave me a bit of an idea
a history teacher (OC Character) at hogwarts gets the harry books
and proceeds to rwad future text rather than past
umm there is alot of spelling errors an the like...
i am tempted to ask to fix it up...
still as said even with the errors i enjoyed reading this... on to book 2
| SarahBellatrixPotterBlack 1/11/12 . chapter 1
you need to learn how to spell
| DragonFire Princess 9/23/11 . chapter 18
Love the story, Hope you'll uploads the story soon, I want to know what happen next in the story. So Please update the story ASAP.
| harrison 8/17/11 . chapter 18
i was wondering what happen to the dresses and make up lol lol lol
| LM Ryder 8/15/11 . chapter 18
brilliant! i particularly loved Snape's reaction to the description of his overgrown bat-like appearance!
| RandomReviewer 5/7/11 . chapter 3
There was a lot of spelling errors but the story is funny and has potential.
| Peltra 4/20/11 . chapter 18
you've spelled 'maybe' wrong.
| fleeting chance 3/26/11 . chapter 2
Wow... Just WOW. I didn't think it could get worse, but it did! I can't read another chapter, this is one of the worst written stories I have ever read, sorry but I'm being honest.
| fleeting chance 3/26/11 . chapter 1
I have never read a fanfiction with worse spelling than that! It was horrible! You didn't even spell Lily right and she's a main character! This is a horribly written story, WAYYYYYY too much yelling and so many spelling mistakes it was hard to understand!
| Vikki 3/21/11 . chapter 18
so very well written this here story is
| shiftyless 2/11/11 . chapter 18
from start 2 finish so damn awesome
| Anon 9/11/10 . chapter 4
I understand that you are using the British version of the book, but the poor spelling is VERY distracting.