that ending was too crule

poor Snape! he must want to kill himself

Wicked Sweet story!

I absolutely loved reading this. I would've reviewed each chapter but I'm lazy and it was already finished so I figured that I'd review the whole story when I finished it.

I didn't think that I'd like Sev and Lucius and Cissa beeing there but I like the way you portray them. I like the idea of them all beeing friends in the altered future.

I really do hope you continue this set of stories. Despite what everyone seems to think there aren't that many "_ and _ read the Harry Potter books". At least not that I've came across and I've looked. So, I really do hope you continue these.

If you are when will the next one be up?

Anyways, I gtg.

God Bless!

-Erica

Er..no offense but your spelling is..well...completely dreadful! Sorry

Good story overall, but you have typos all over the place! Just do a re-read of each chappie, you'll find most of them. Most times its things like 'tot he' or the like.

Intresting start, but you have a great many typos, like, "ont he" or "wrk"

*whoops* I alwasy enjoyed AUs on the Marauders and company reading the HP series, but this was definetly the best one I have ever read!

It's so cool to see all the parents freaking out, scolding, etc. The commentary was brillant as well as the "punishments." The ending was brillant. Well, I'm off to read the sequel; wonderful job once again!

Psst!

If you're setting this story while Snape is still a student, then it would be during the mid 1970s. During the 1970s computers were not small. They were huge and very few people had computers, let alone ones with games on them. Most people didn't even have Atari videogame consoles until the late 1970s and early 1980s. And handheld videogames didn't really become widespread until the early 1990s.

So Snape should be nearly as puzzled by the "computer games" as the purebloods are (or at least surprised and amazed), despite having a muggle for a father.

Please update! I'm dying here!

Well...hm...intersting...verdy verdy intersting...I have enjoyed this story although my canon-nazi self really wishes someone would write a story similar to yours where everyone is in characater, not that your characters arent,its just the whole Malfoys being nice, and never mind Narcissa whos a freakin Black for Merlins sake...just suddenly chucks the whole Purebloods R the best everyo ne else is pond scum and should be eliminated thing...other than that its good...:-D And dont get me started on said creppy relationship btween Lucius and Snape..*shudders...lol

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Dun Dun dun...

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Yes yes yes we all know Snapes good in the end...But he still had his flaws...please dont turn him into a puddle of mush..I happen to love the snarky, sarcastic Potions Master tyvm..not the lover-of-bunnies-and-flowers(no pun intend lol hehehehehehehehehehehehe ahem ) some idiot Suethors make him out to be...same goes for Malfoy..:-D

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Oh great..more implied slash...*sighs atleast this time it was funny..poor Moony lol...

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Hm...verdy interesting... Although I love this new Malfoy/Black thing, they would never act like that in canon but whatever..:-D

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hm the plot thickens

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