I love this story!! i hope you update soon.

i like your story a lot. you right really well and your grammer and spelling is about 10x better then many of the other stories i've read! can't wait to read more! Thanx!

hey great chapter. the longer the chapter, the better the update. well usually anyway. anyway keep it up. its hard to find stories with this much depth.

I liked the story and the grammar is great.

There's a few problems though~

1) for a whole update very little happened. (when I say this I mean that, since you don't update often there should be more progression of the plot in each update)
2)This may be a pointless question, but have you planned out the next part(s) of the story? Some writers back themselves into a corner with their plot and then decide to abandon the fic at that point. I'm not saying that *will* happen but I have seen some early signs of it. (the signs being that Naruto has problems with Mizuki, but he doesn't do anything about it for "cowardly reasons...?" Why doesn't he just run if hes THAT cowardly.

At any rate, this is a good fic and it is worth reading. I look forward to more updates. Update more often maybe?

Poor Naruto. Damn you Mizuki. I can't wait for the day when Naruto finally kicks his a**.
Another great chapter. Please update soon.

Naruto should take Hinata's help.

I like this story.

You ** moron! how about in the next chapter, naruto snaps and becomes his real self. in the next chapter he cou;d kick mizuki's as. In fact, you make naruto kill him and naruto could beat the crap out the students like kiba. i think 10 chapters of naruto's torture is SOSOSO ** ENOUGH! if you need help, email me at tarik. AND DO NOT STOP THIS SADSADSADSADSADSADSADSADSADSADSADSADSADSADSADSADSADSADSADSDSADSADSADSADSAD SAD STORY!

Great story.

Damn Mizuki.

Amazing story! Mizuki... Heh. This is really creative, despite being NarutoHinata, which I normally don't read because it's so repetitive. Please update within the next few years. If you don't, I will find you.

Poor Naruto.

Nice chapter.

Poor Naruto.

I find myself compelled to see what happens to Naruto in this story. I can only hope that everything ends up better for him. You've got good grammar but unfortunately you tended to be very repetitive in this chapter. This story's plot is moving in a nice pace none-the-less and I can't wait for the next chapter. Here's to hoping its a long one.