Excellent story so far.

I was wondering when you were planning on writing the next chapter, as I would like to find out what Alex and Elena think about Ben's discovery.

Please update soon...



-(-)- Mark -(-)-

oh my gawd! i'm luvin' it! PLEASE PLEASE keep writing!!

Yet another remarkable chapter! Excellent work!

I'm glad that Johnny and Ben know who the girls really are. Hopefully they'll tell Reed and Sue soon! I can't wait to find out what they're reactions will be, or the girls reaction for that matter. Anyways, great work! I loved it! Please update soon! (=

Wow! I seriously thought that Reed would discover that Elena and Alex were the twins! Not Johnny! I just hope Johnny tells him before he starts his computer work with the files.

Update soon! I'd love to see the looks on Reed and Sue's faces when they realize that Doom knows who and where the twins are. I just hope the girls are forgiving when they find out that Reed and Sue are their mother and father.

Yay! I'm so glad you updated! This was a great chapter! I loved it! Can't wait for the girls to find out who thier birth parents are, and vice-versa! Anyways, great work! Please update soon! (=

this one waz the best you keep clif hanging us whens the next one common out could you get to the point

Poor Alex and Elena! I really thought Doom was going to tell Alex that Reed was her father. So that's what Doom wants the twins for. I just hope Reed and Sue will be able to protect them when they find out that the girls are their twins and can still train them.

chapter 8

Wow, awesome chapter! What will she do when she relizes that he really is her father? I can't wait to find out! Please update soon! (=

Hey! Sorry 4 not logginh in, but at my uncle/aunt place for Thanksgiving and stuff.

Sweet! When will El and Alex find out that Sue and Reed are the real parents!?!?!?!?!

luv ya!

HAPPY THANKSGIVING EVERYONE!

great story please UPDATE soon

/gasp/ plz hurry! PLZ! ITS SO AWUSM!

The ending was funny "Geez, he acts like my father." I wonder what's going to happen when she finds out that is her father. It'd be funny if she's still hacking after finding out their relationship to each other and he gets upset. Thanks for updating. Update soon

Great Story Please COntnue Soon. :)