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| Kathi-san 2008-05-11 ch 1,  | abuseHey First of all, don't listen to what that piece of ** is telling you in the other review you recieved. He is obviously either extremely bored, or has absolutely no life whatsoever, (I mean, look at his profile, it's pathetic.) I feel deeply sorry for him/her, but then again I don't cos I guess he deserves it! haha Anyway, I liked your story! If i had one criticism though, then it would be to maybe put some spaces in it, just so it's a little easier to read! Also, you might want to add chapter two in the same fic as chapter one, so people can find it easier! ;) But I did like your story, so please continue! I like the way it's written in first person, and it was interesting! Please update soon! |
| Flame Rising 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseCongratulations. You should feel very honored. Why, might you ask? Well, I’ll tell you. Your story has earned the distinction of being placed into my respected and revered C2. With nearly 200 subscribers, it portrays the very best examples of its genre. Who am I? Well, I am a very humble reviewer of fan fiction with a small forum right here on the site. Now just because you have earned this honor from me, I hope you will not slack off and rest on your laurels. Please continue to produce stories of this caliber so that I can add them to my C2. Best regards, F/R |