 freeflow 2008-05-10 . chapter 1Love this. Absolutely in character - if this is you out of practice, then I need to read anything from your Yami No Matsuei days!
Lots of things of fantastic quality;
Tsuzuki's cheerfulness - Declaring that 'We're home!' when it clearly is not his house is classic Tsuzuki, and made me smile. I've missed his random happy moments!
Hisoka's disassociation - this was really very well written; the sense that Hisoka was lost somewhere in his own mind and only vaguely aware of reality, even after waking up, was delicately but very obviously a purposeful approach on your part, and I loved the distance that it placed between the reader and where Tsuzuki was waiting, calling us back. M!
Oh, and them falling asleep together. I love this pairing to begin with, and even gen pieces are usually adorable, but warm fuzzy Hisoka and happy Tsuzuki are my favourite kind.
A wonderful fic to add to your awesome collection.
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