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Yellowbulma
2009-11-14 . chapter 1
Aww adorable =)
QuickenMyEnd
2009-10-14 . chapter 1
aw, of course Dean would take a fire drill so much more seriously then the other kids, love this!
K-Marie-M
2009-05-24 . chapter 1
Maybe next time they should warn the whole school and not just hte kindergarden class.
ToxicLullaby
2008-08-30 . chapter 1
Oh my God...that was...God, I don't know whether to cry of laugh! Poor Dean! I bet that made him so embarrassed! Okay, I think I'm going to go with laugh, but the tears are still there. Great job!
KaylaRyan17
2008-08-27 . chapter 1
lol...that's great Dean's so cute in his overprotective big brother way...:) Great story
Cari
2008-05-14 . chapter 1
Dean really should pay more attention sometimes ^_^
rozzy07
2008-05-11 . chapter 1
Oh lordy you really could feel Dean's panic growing with each passing second, his need to find his brother, to get him to safety as he recalled painfully what damage a fire could do. Mr Lackey was the perfect tool for Dean to deflect against, and the older man's sage understanding was covered in just a few choice words but gave Dean enough leeway to go find his so innocent brother. Loved it.

A wonderful one piece, perfect to stand alone as it does, but leaving you open to add to perhaps with other pertinent moments in the weeWinchester growing up experiences (hint, hint!!)that peppers their lives.
funkyhigh
2008-05-11 . chapter 1
i think fire drills are stupid cause when there finally is a real fire no one will take it seriously, though getting out of class is nice. Dean's reaction is understandable, great fic!!
parisindy
2008-05-11 . chapter 1
oh man i would love more of this..i bet the teachers call john etc
calcium77
2008-05-10 . chapter 1
that was really cute! Good to see you back! it seems like ages sinceI have seen a post from you. If you have lots if story ideas,by all means, write them up.
alwaysateen
2008-05-10 . chapter 1
Oh so cute.

It's just so like Dean to be so worried about his brother, even for a fire drill.

Good to see you back here, I was wondering what happened to you...
sunkisst (not logged in)
2008-05-10 . chapter 1
aw this was adorable :)
sammygirl1963
2008-05-10 . chapter 1
Awesome oneshot, you had me so worried as DFean searched frantically for his little brother. I just jknew then that the school was truly on fire, until I got to the end and Sammy told him everything was fine that it was just a drill!

Loved it!
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