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| graypheonix 2008-07-20 ch 13, | abuseHm, interesting. Neh, continue to update, afterall, using Kryptonian technology to repair a terminator? This could REALLY suck, I'll be honest. Neh. Continue to update, ja ne. |
| Blackhawk 2008-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story has potential; it had a lot of it, from what I’ve read. |
| CIFan812 2008-07-08 ch 12, | abuseOh, excellent update! Poor Kon-El... I like you how are weaving multiple expects into your story. Can't wait to find out what happens next. |
| CIFan812 2008-07-02 ch 11, | abuseAnother great chapter. I loved all the background. Love Bruce... he can be such a smug jerk sometimes. I always liked his friendship with Superman, and I'm glad to see him make an appearance. |
| JamesTKent 2008-06-26 ch 11, | abuseYou have an interesting set of plot lines, here, and some great character development -- I'm going to be fascinated by how you tie it all together. |
| Chris St Thomas 2008-06-21 ch 10, | abuseAnd JamesTKent wins the Easter Egg Prize!! These last several chapters have been Chock Full of Easter Eggs. The next three reviewers to list on eof the Easter Eggs in their reviews get to nominate a name for the Easter Egg Prize. Then we'll give the Prize away in the Reviews Column or the Author's Note each week, till we finish the story. Or until we stop putting in Easter Eggs. All prior Easter Eggs are fair game. Happy Hunting St Thomas |
| CIFan812 2008-06-18 ch 10, | abuseAnother great chapter. I loved the Jason's rematch with the terminator. So many questions (which I don't really expect you to answer and give any thing away)... Is the Big Guy going to show up eventually, since we know he's not really dead - just in desperate need of sunlight? And is Jason going to officially become Superboy and pretend to be Superman's clone in order to avoid the whole awkward son of Superman thing? -Angie |
| JamesTKent 2008-06-18 ch 10, | abuseI loved both the rematch AND the discussion, especially the part about comparing Richard White to Scott Summers, since James Marsden played both roles. Are Corny Collins from "Hairspray" or Prince Edward from "Enchanted" going to show up? I like what you're doing with Rayner and the presaging of the Power Ring. I also hope Jason develops a bit more power as he uses it. |
| CIFan812 2008-06-15 ch 9, | abuseI love this story. It's very well written, and I can't wait for the next chapter. -Angie |
| countryLexluv 2008-06-13 ch 9, | abuseI actually saw most of the episode with the raid. There was nothing else on that night. You two have seemlessly written this one. I really can't tell what either of you wrote. So much happened in this chapter that its hard to comment on any one thing. The 'girl' at the beginning, is 'she' the reason the car explodes? Or is that going to be explained later? Update again soon. |
| Gravespawn 2008-06-10 ch 8, | abuseupdate soon |
| countryLexluv 2008-06-05 ch 8, | abuseAnother well-written chapter. I was kinda wondering if Luthor was going to be in here. And he is. I look foward to the next chapter. I liked the invisible Amazon jet, too. |
| countryLexluv 2008-06-02 ch 7, | abuseAnother excelent chapter with an equally excelent fight. I was wondering if you were going to have any of the Terminators have Kryptonite on them since Superman was around. The idea of Jason posing as John. Richard is Lois's boss now? It makes sense I guess. I hope they can trust Richard's friend, though, because Richard was right; anyone who works on that particular story could find out certain... information. I hope the next chapter comes soon. And great writing St Thomas. |
| d 2008-06-01 ch 7, anon. | abusegood chapter. that fight reminded me of a fight between supes and metallo. anyways keep going. |
| Chris St Thomas 2008-05-30 ch 6, | abusehello to the fans, St Thomas here. Not to worry, guys MK is still watching over my virtual shoulder here. He's reading my chapters and making comments. I will work a recap of Terminator Sarah Connor Chronicles in the next chapter. I had a short one planned, but MK and I will expand it. thank you for your support |