Reviews for Beauty in the Breakdown

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sej1986 2008-07-22 ch 10,	abuseI FINALLY READ IT! And what can I say?? It was definitely well worth the wait. Although, I wish Hawkes had got a happy ending with someone. I can just imagine that though, pretend he met me and we lived happily ever after... uh, did I say that out loud? :D
TutorGirlml 2008-06-20 ch 10,	abuseWow. I just wanted to say that I love how you ended this all up. So sweet and wonderful and romantic. Especially Flack and Stella finally admitting their true feelings, and then meeting each other's eyes during the wedding. Danny's telling her, "That boy wants ta marry ya, Stell," was perfect and her coming back with, "Tell him to ask me." I also thought the emotion between Danny and Lindsey when they were dancing at the very end was really beautiful and touching. It had me all choked up. Great job. Now we just have to find somebody wonderful for Hawkes and we'll be all set! Thanks for sharing this story. I really loved reading it!
nyakattia 2008-06-20 ch 10,	abuseAww, that was so sweet! I'm so glad Stella and Lindsay made up- really I think they are so close as friends- you can see it in that episode when Linds got flashbacks, and I'm glad they could talk things out! I loved the Fiesta (of course!) and liked the conversation between Stella and Danny about Flack asking her to marry him. It made me aww actually. :P It's a nice closure between the characters. And I liked that Danny and Lindsay got back together at the end!
Blaze709 2008-06-19 ch 10,	abuseVery well written. You did an excellent job of harmonizing the dialogue with the characters' actions.
scoob2222 2008-06-18 ch 10,	abuseamazing fic, great job as always
feathergirl926 2008-06-18 ch 10,	abuseWow, this last chapter was absolutely beautiful. THe whole story was great. I loved the way you captured the characters' various emotions!
KickassScot 2008-06-18 ch 10,	abuseYAY! D & L back together, and everyone happy :-) Absolutly loved this chapter!!
Mellow girl 2008-06-18 ch 10,	abuseWhat a great way to end a beautiful story! I love happy endings!!
ThnksFrThMmrs87 2008-06-18 ch 10,	abuseSo beautiful. I'm thrilled that everything worked out and I loved the parallel to Snow Day with Lindsay kissing Danny's chest at the end. :) Wonderful as usual
laurzz 2008-06-17 ch 9,	abuseThat last paragraph is something of comedic genius. I love the imagery of Danny throwing the book at the switch, ans succeeding. Another brilliant chapter, i always smile when i see a update now!
ThnksFrThMmrs87 2008-06-17 ch 9,	abuseOh my God! I'm freaking out over how fabulous this is. I loved Stella and Flack's scene; I think that was the perfect way for them to finally admit their feelings. The emotions with Danny and Lindsay were spot on, and I can totally see her just losing it like that. Fabulous
Mellow girl 2008-06-17 ch 9,	abuseI'M so glad Don and Stella told each other the way the feel. I hope Danny and Lindsey can work things out. Great Chapter!!
Bec0512 2008-06-17 ch 8,	abuse"I know I fucked up. I know I broke your heart. And I also know I can't ever undo that. But I'm so sorry, Lindsay." I've read a lot of fics with a apologies, but this has to be one of the best. Another great chapter. :)
nyakattia 2008-06-16 ch 8,	abuseYay! Stella admits it too. So in the next chapter we'll get to see them working things out, right? :P The Danny/Lindsay thing is making me sad though. :( I hope they can work things out, and stop messing things up for everyone else. :P
KickassScot 2008-06-16 ch 8,	abuseyou had me thinking this was a really nice chapter with everyone making up and Mac & Stella getting on again...then you put Lindsay having a date that wasn't Danny...and I could have strangled you about then! You've sorted everyone else out...could you please sort them out too...pretty please?!?!

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