Good job. So few stories focus around Bail and Leia, but you really captured his emotions here.

Beautiful drabble. Every word is carefully selected and fits perfectly. And it is from Bail Organa's point of view, which just makes it that more wonderful.

Interesting that Vader's nonrecognition of his own daughter proves to be both a blessing and a curse. Perceptive of Bail, and of you as the author.

Simply marvelous.

good stories

"Vader has spent the last sixteen years teaching himself to forget Skywalker—he will not see Anakin’s features in his daughter’s face." Wow. That summed the whole thing up, and that was very striking. Good work.

LOL! I like how you so quickly and consistently characterize Qui-Gon as messy (collecting plants as he does "pathetic life forms"), but also as intelligent. Very good!

Good job! You really captured Dooku's character in this. :-)

Even in dreams his son doesn't want him. A great job with few words.

Good. Up untill that last line it wasn't quite as poignant and unexpected as your stories have been, but that last line really made it. Very good.

*sigh*

Music to my Luke/Vader-loving soul...

I love these drabbles. I have far too meandering a style to write them, but I love reading them. Sort of like M&Ms, only more meaningful. Good job. :)

*sniff*

So sad, yet so beautifully done. Good work!

Phantom Jedi

I have never seen a Darth Maul introspective piece done well and in character - congratulations and I hope to see you write more.

Brilliant insight into the mind of the man. Being a weapon is not an occupation that guarantees retirement. Although, with Grevious and the others, it would have been a colorful crowd.

Truly wonderful job with this drabble.

Excellent! Thanks so much. I always saw Maul as not being like every other Sith, not wanting to take over, and you've done an fine exploration of that. (There's very little EU matter on Maul, so don't worry about that.)

I really like the phrase, and the pause, heavy with thinking, in "But...he was good at being a weapon."

Very thought-provoking. Sidious did indeed train him to be the iron fist, much as he did with Vader, and never the velvet glove.

Phantom Jedi

You have a talent for bringing both obscure characters and obscure relationships to light in such a way that the reader is left wondering, "why didn't I ever see that before?"