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Reviews For: The Worst Day Ever Or Not

S. Faith
2008-06-07
ch 1,
abuseOh, v. much liked this. One question: which scene, exactly, is this AUing? The Ruby Wedding Party?

One small thing:

"they somehow staggered up to Han’s apartment"

Han? :)

I don't see Mark as a "baby" sort of man, but rather "darling". However, that's very minor. All in all: hope to see more, both on this story and new BJD ones!
MrsKiLupin-Darcy
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abuseHaha! So, I definitely love this.
I'd never be able to get Bridget's hilarious mind dialouge right, but you nailed it perfectly!!
wyo
2008-05-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseplease please continue!
Jane Austen's Angels
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abuseV.G good Story
ballyksangl
2008-05-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseInteresting concept, hope that you continue on with this - are you ? good luck with your writings
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