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| S. Faith 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abuseOh, v. much liked this. One question: which scene, exactly, is this AUing? The Ruby Wedding Party? One small thing: "they somehow staggered up to Han’s apartment" Han? :) I don't see Mark as a "baby" sort of man, but rather "darling". However, that's very minor. All in all: hope to see more, both on this story and new BJD ones! |
| MrsKiLupin-Darcy 2008-05-31 ch 1, | abuseHaha! So, I definitely love this. I'd never be able to get Bridget's hilarious mind dialouge right, but you nailed it perfectly!! |
| wyo 2008-05-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease please continue! |
| Jane Austen's Angels 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseV.G good Story |
| ballyksangl 2008-05-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting concept, hope that you continue on with this - are you ? good luck with your writings |