Hmmmmm...you can actually do a perfect crime, huh.But then, nothing's a perfect crime when it comes to a detective like him.

Nice one-shot...and it was an actual case. I thought it was an interesting touch that you did it entirely from the POV of the culprit. 10/10

Terrific! But...Lily is an English name, since they are Japanese, maybe you should have used a Japanses name. Example: Mira, Mina, Rina, Rika, Miyura, Sakura, or anything Japanese. Lily just sounds so foreign, doesn't match with the Japanese mom and dad, oh yeah, and I think you should have used rating T instead of K because of the concept of 'one night stand' kids can't know about what that means yet, you know. But, it was really a nice story! Finally, a case, I mean, this IS a mystery anime, isn't it? All I find is romance romance and more romance, I'm getting sick of them, finally someone wrote a mystery case, as soon as I saw the genre, I dove right in this page! Awesome work! XD! I really liked it! I bet the woman will turn herself in or else she wouldn't have a conscience! I like how you arranged the sequence of themystery in the story! Nicely done

Ok werid question but didn't you write Estrelas for the DP section? If you did that's werid. I've kinda given up on DP and switched over to Conan but it's werid that you write stuf for my old favorite show my new fav show and my big bro's fav video game (megaman) Very strange indeed

I love the outsider-is-creeped-out-by-conan fics so much. It's ridiculous.

Beautiful story! You really feel for Kubota, even when she's so quickly introduced. And Conan is ridiculously sweet. "Well I can't prove it so do this and you'll be fine." Haha. Too bad he'd have chucked her in jail in a heartbeat if he had any evidence. xD

Man, I love your fics. This was an awesome story!

...wow...was that really your first case fanfic? dang, that's good! i mean, really good! you got the personalities perfect, the case was described in perfect detail...wow...that's all I can say! oh, and by the way, i've read your rockman.EXE stories too, they are amazing!

meh. no offense or anything, but that wasn't exactly as complicated or clever as any of Conan's canon cases. I mean...she set a fire. End of story. No one even died. Someone *always* dies. oh well. i dont mean to make you unhappy or anything, please don't take this as anything other than semi-constructive criticism. i like a lot of your other stories. maybe i should try and write a case fic with a crazy plot and everything. it sounds like it would be very difficult to be so tricky. ::shrugs:: you have a good night now.

Nice to see something different. I wonder how the rest of the world would view the boy wonder.

Very well-done POV from a rare perspective. I could definitely see this being the motivations of a suspect in one of the anime/manga cases.

Good lord- from the commentary at the end of your fic, you have more voices in your head than even *me*! Just kidding, just kidding. Really nice fic- good to see a straightforward mystery done so cleanly. Thanks!

Cool!

*squeals* The wit and intellect of Kuudo Shinichi shines through yet again. _ Ne ne, do you have any idea how hard it is to find a MC/DC (Meitantei/Detective Conan) fic that actually relates to the mystery element of the manga and Anime? Great job as always, Shi-chan! Keep me updated on your Meitantei Conan and Digimon fics! _