Reviews for Close Protection, of a Sort

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Artemis1292 2008-10-06 ch 1,	abusei love your story! update soon!
incarnationofvictory 2008-09-30 ch 6, anon.	abuseoohh, update!, update!, this was an amazing story keep going please(some authors never update it's so annoying)!
mistylake 2008-09-27 ch 6,	abuselove it!11
kisstina123 2008-09-27 ch 6,	abusethis is good, idk what i didnt like...nick came off as a little gay though so im not sure if you were meaning to do that! lol i loved it though, i was litterally on the edge of my seat during the fight scene! keep it up! can't wait fo rhte next chappie!
rockenweirdo 2008-09-21 ch 6,	abuseUPDATE REALLY, REALLY, REALLY SOON! I LIKE THIS STORY A LOT!
darkxangelx-xo 2008-09-20 ch 6,	abusewkd i really really cant wait for more that was just an absolutely amazing chapter brilliant job so far hope for an update soon
crazybibliophile 2008-09-18 ch 6,	abusethis story's awesome! best alex rider fic I've read in ages.
Meia-Noite 2008-09-16 ch 6,	abuseGreat story! The characters are well-developed, and I think you've captured Alex's nature well. I always did think it was rather strange that the only friend of Alex that was mentioned was Tom, so the fact that he actually had a few friends in your story makes it much more realistic, I believe. The not quite relationship he has with K-Unit is very amusing though. It has a lot of potential. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this story is going!
japaneserockergirl 2008-09-15 ch 1,	abuseWhoa...just...whoa. That was so amazingly written! The drama, the anger, the doubt, the emotion! It feels so much like Anthony Horowitz's books that it's scary! I don't have a single complaint about it. Keep up the excellent work! japaneserockergirl ;D
Lilly Tiger 2008-09-15 ch 6,	abuseUpdate soon please
x EMIILII x 2008-09-10 ch 6,	abuseHey, the story is realli good. lookin 4ward 2 da confrontation ova da bullet wound - shud b interestin.
Taigh 2008-09-04 ch 6,	abuseCool take on the "Alex goes to train with the SAS again - but with his school" scenario! Um... so my one constructive criticism is your use of the word "homeroom". I know that you apologised for your American-ness, but I couldn't think of anything else to say on the criticism front, so you can see this as a compliment :D. So yeah. In the UK, before classes you generally have Registration, which sounds like what you said homeroom was; you also refer to 9B as a homeroom, while that would most commonly be known as a "form". I really don't understand the US school system, so if I've got stuff totally backwards let me know.
angiesmile 2008-09-01 ch 6,	abuseupload again as soon as possible please! cue puppy dog eyes :p I really enjoyed reading this story so far and I can't wait to the next chapter! the angsty bits were really good if you had written them more depressingly it wouldn't have been what you expected Alex to think - i think you got the balance right...I thought that the fight scene with the flashbacks was really effective and it showed that even those who 'have the luck of the devil' (sorry couldn't help myself :P) lose their nerve sometimes... wow i think this might even be the longest review i've written >.< anyways upload soon please
Johnny-on-the-spot 2008-08-31 ch 6,	abuseOh, nice ; I do like this chapter! Will the K-unit find out about alex being shot?
crazy-gal-in-blue 2008-08-29 ch 6,	abusewow the whole flash backs thing is deep it took long enough for alex to find out the his mind will never work the right way again. I love the doorknob thing is perfect and makes sense. cant wait for more CGIB

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