cant wait. seriously. i need to see what happens next. UPDATE SOON! ruki+ takato= happy rukato fan (duh!)

Please update soon! Loving the plot

- Nemisis

it's interesting though riffing of dragonball Z a bit. it has potential i'll be watching to see where it goes.

uhm, hello, in case you don't know, Lucemon Choas Mode is the leader of the Seven Great Demon Lords, and in case you don't know the others, i'll run them all past you
there's Barbamon, Beelzemon, Lilithmon, Leviamon, Daemon, Belphemon Rage Mode and Lucemon Choas Mode
they each stand for (in the order presented) Greed, Gluttony, Lust, Envy, Wrath, Sloth and Pride. okay? so you'd better fix up this story

yah!! i love this story, it's awesome!
update soon! please?

GOOD STORY!!

I'm pretty sure Beelzemon is greed, not Gluttony of the seven demon lord digimon.
And Chaosmon, as his base form is pretty much like Omnimon( DNA'ed from Bantoleomon and Darkdramon), the heads of the digimon that DNA-ed are his lower arms, and such. Still, he's a good antagonist for the long run, as I remember reading somewhere that he has another Form, known as UltimateChaosmon, DNA-ed from the previous two along with Valdurmon and Sleipmon, or evolves directly from the former. But I'm betting you were aware of this. If memory serves, it was up there with Galacticmon and Zeedmilleniumon.

The chapter was really good. The twist with Rika's father having the spirit of BlackWargreymon is interesting. That is one heck of a power source he has. I can not wait for the next chapter and a happy birthday to you.

Great story so far! You actuallu managed to give the whole 'digimon-fusing-with-a-human' thing a twist that I've never seen before, and one that makes your story more poignant (insofar as Guilmon having to die for Takato to gain his power). And Rika's dad, alive, but having left unwillingly? I have to say, I did NOT see that one coming! And on the matter of what digimon Steven fused with, the black armor, along with Takato's reaction, is making me think BlackWargreymon. There are other black armored digimon out there, but BlackWargreymon is the most prominent and famous one. Anyways, I can barely wait for the next chapter. And have a preemptive Happy Memorial Day!

General Blackout,
Signing Off

for a guess I'd say alphamon

My guess is that Steven becomes Chaosgallantmon.

Wow. Rika is handling this way better then I would have, that is for sure. If I were Rika, I wouldn't have talk to Takato at all. After all, he is being an a** and not the lovable Gogglehead that we all love so much. He threatened her and then he has the nerve to say that he loved her. I would have slapped him, threat or no threat. What a -censored-. Anyway, better know. As for the dad, I would have done the same thing I guess. High tailed it out of there, hoping that it was all a nightmare, that he really wasn't back... But anyway, love the story. I will be waiting for an update!

Very well written but as a suggestion you can include the concept of DNA charge to help Takato achieve his next level of power.

nice job though i would have one in a more digimon fronter direction then dragon ball z and have takato able spirit evolve into a different champion form that looks like a form of gallentmon.

NICE

Interesting story, like the way you are going. Please continue!