I like the style of your writing. I can really feel the mood of depression and worry. I hope to be able to read some more of it soon. thank you.

hey, this could shape up to be a really good story... it's written really well - i hope you haven't given up on it! thanks!

nice, cant wait for the next chapters.

Thank you so much for not letting it go to waist. I enjoy reading this very much. I did go back and read the first two chapters again. Wonderful job. Until next time.

i think it's good. i follow it but maybe that's becasue i'm a writer too?

i like this style because you can see more of what's going on in the character's heads.

HEY! keep going! ;; I must know what happenes!

An interesting lead-in. I hope to see more so please update again soon!

Gemini

i really feel sad for sakura, nice job in describing her face expressions, update soon

Excellent!

wonder what will happen

good first chapter, u've got me interested, can't wait for more

I like the new story. A good beginning and lots of potential. Please keep up the good work.

Gemini

please continue