Muscular energetic writing. Itachi 's thoughts rip one along behind him..fkin hot.

This story is really good. You should write more...maybe even get some of these published. But then again...I'm only a writing major. So...I can't wait to read more!

OH PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!

I'm a big fan of evil! Sasuke. Could you capture his darker side in this story. By the way who do you think is more truly evil, Sasuke or Itachi?

Great beginning. This one is using canon materials. Want to see Sasukke keep his hatred and have a fight.

wow, wow, the sex was so hot. Plz update soon.>.

ah you have to do another chapter im hooked now its soo good update please!!

dude ok omg im sorry it was good but for some reason i dont know maybe the way you worded it or something but this chapter had me cracking up i was seriously dying of laughter it was a good chapter though and i plan to read the rest.

Gosh, this looks interesting! Loved the little game. Plus I'm curious to see you do Sasuke in this time frame, since he's not as innocent as he was when he was younger.

ooh, different timeframe! And very good considering it was based on the word 'pain'. (No happy ending? >.< !) XD

Yay! I hate and love the cliffhanger type thing!
Hurry! I'm running out of brownies XD

Another amazing story!! Update soon please and keep up the awesome work!! ^_^

what I'd like to know is, was the dream from last chapter really a dream (one they both shared) or was it a memory? I'm pretty sure it's a dream, but why would it be of them at that age?
can't wait to see what happens next!

Nice.

Omg Update soon please !! ^_^