I'm impressed. You have a well written story here that kept me focused the entire time. I admit, however, that your hints regarding Macavity being the end of it weren't too subtle, but that may be my tendency to look for info on him and see how he's being dealt with. Well done, all told.

WRITE THE SEQUAL FAST!
YOU CANT JUST LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT!
i love the story
and my prediction was right!
WOOHOO
i always thought macavity was sexy in a wierd way. lol
i adore the way you potray the characters so perfectly in this drama, but i think bombalurina should have more fighting spirit.
can wait!

LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!
write that sequal lickety split!
i love the bomba/tugger pairing except it seems as though macavity will be extracting some revenge in the sequal. please let tugger kick jerrie's **! im sick of him whining like a MOTHER FRWAKIN PANSY! btw the drama is fabulous, i love the way you make the CATS world seem so real.
can wait for oct 21! btw HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY!

i loved that chapter!

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wow, you made Etcetera really evil.
I'm going to be quite scared if i ever see a cat the same colour as her.
Loving this so far.

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wow, i gotta admit, that was really good.
now for part two...

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OMG I can soo imagine an evil Etcetera! Damn you Tugsy you're causing soo much problems! poor Bombs torn between both of them!!

it's good

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kill that ** etcy!! kill her!!

OMG Tugger angry enough to ask for help?

tugsy never asks for help!! that's like amazing!!

ooh angry/jelous Tugsy is really scary!!

it's a good story!!

OMG I knew Etcy would be like that!! I would too!!

hahaha

OMG is Tugger going to do something stupid!!?

NO NO NO NO NO NO TUGGER NO NO NO NO NO NO

aww poor tugsy
bombie should be with him not jerrie!

Tuggerina is just soo right!!

I love this story (how many times have i said that??)

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ILOVEMYTUGSYWUGSYBABESYDOLLY!

lol

i love this story soo much!

aww it's so sweet how Tugger wants to be Bombii's best friend again but bombii doesn't cos he forgot her

lolz

it'z still real good.

oh and BTW I like flashbacks!!