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Reviews for: Protector of the Breed
Mris
2008-07-13 . chapter 1
I really liked this. A dragon and Xander is somehow a perfect symmtry together. Will you be writing anymore of this? How the Scoobies will react to him having a daughter? How his daughter will take up her slayer duties? How even the other slayers will look at her? Wow, plot bunnies galore with this one!
kyo anime
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
love the idea. please update soon.
Schiavona
2008-05-16 . chapter 1
I think that you have created an interesting story and background here. I hope that you will continue this story further on.

Maybe with Willow being all super-witch now she can break or cause the curse to rebound back onto it caster thus allowing Celeste to survive. You could even tie it to remaining with her Protector and have them stay at one of the Slayer Houses. She would make for a good House mother or helper for a bunch of young Slayers.

Anyway I hope that you continue this story and I be looking forward for more from you.

Thanks for posting...
bandgsecurtiyaw
2008-05-11 . chapter 1
Interesting so far.
Get-Lost
2008-05-11 . chapter 1
Sounds good so far, I just hope that the mother lives. Those in her last eyrie sound like they need a kick in the nuts, imo.
The_Hero
2008-05-11 . chapter 1
So, based on Xander character knowledge, I'm thinking the next chapter is Xander locating the Eyrie and taking them out to force them to remove the curse, correct?

Considering the protectiveness he's always shown in the series, I can easily see that happening.
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