great story! :D i loved the way you gave most of the non-playable characters a bigger role in the story. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

from, quizilla member harrypotterisnotapokemon

I... love it. I had a Pikachu for a partner, but I felt that if I had a Treecko there would be some connection. I had the same feeling in my stomach that I had when I was just hearing what Grovlye was saying. I... I dont know how to explain that feeling though. It's strange. It actually feels like i was there. One of my deepest wishes is that I COULD be in something like this.

...WHEN did I start sounding so responsible...

Interesting! I really didn't expect this story, where you made everything fit, just something about celebi... And that last part where the other Kelac was crying reminded me of Kingdom hearts 2 ...

Ack! Curse auto-logout! The review beginning with "I love this!! ^^ Well, of course..." is mine, sorry! (sweatdrop) And I should add: awesome dialogue with great quotes.

I love this!! ^^ Well, of course now we have PMD3 to explain everything, but that doesn't change this awesome story! When Time/Darkness first came out, I was wondering how they could still allow Treecko players/partners even though Grovyle was a main character. You fit that in well with Grovyle being Kelac in the future. You didn't go way overboard with the Grovyle/Celebi either. And as always, Grovyle is pwn. This fanfic is awesome, and I almost wish it wasn't a Oneshot! :D

I find this story very fitting for Grovyle. Strange, I was a Treeko the third time I played PMD2 (for my story, I wanted to get the start of my plot right). If I wan't a girl, I proabily would of thought of that before...but that actually makes sense.

What is the “We could’ve been something so much more special.” thing?

That was awsome. I liked how you combined the helper and grovile together and used original names for your characters.

Well done!

Phenominal! This does seem like a proper ending to Grovyle's story, rather than the simple cutoff in the game. This would have made a good cutscene, too! Keep up the good work!

INCREDIBLE!!

This was such a beautifully written story. I wish there was more stories like this around because Grovyle was such a brilliant character.

Agreed about Grovyle being the unsung hero of the game. I really like this one-shot a lot, it even inspired me enough to restart my game over and choose Treecko as my partner.

Honoring Grovyle as well, ne? I do so, aswell, the first ending was so sad! Usually, my partners name is something like Skye, Rouge, even Hikari! Yes, I've replayed it a crapload of times, no I'm not exagerating. Great story, though. FINALLY, an idea of what happened to poor Grovyle!

u rock

You're right, Grovyle really was the unsung hero. You did really well in writing this and it's made me wish I had a Treecko as a partner.