*dun dun da dun!* lol im here and have a huge bowl of popcorn right here! yum! lol ready to read my review?
more drama? is that even possible? haha jk
im so excited it is updated! i will never leave, patience is one of my many specialties
I hope your life becomes better and more manageable
lol first and foremost i love the chapter title
alli was just running on adrenaline i guess after all that happened though, who can blame her
lol the lynching of daggeron! i am so in *pitchfork and burning torch suddenly appear* what? too old fashioned? ok *pulls out wand and blow torch* heheh
but shouldnt the most violent be saved for last? lol after all you have to work up to it as the greatest grand finale ever
go girls go! lol ROTFL i love this so much you dont even know
syd needs metal stat! lol she should keep some handy at all times
is syd gonna use her fist or does it just make her feel better?
focus people! eating daggeron alive remmeber? good job getting back on track v
hey dont hurt bridge he is just enjoying his girlfriend in her fit of anger
anyone else want to break out in foreign language? syd why dont you speak french?
OMG i cant believe you did go french fro syd! lol i was just saying but i guess our minds are just so similar. that is crazy stuff
nice, the entire cultures of the world are here with the girls, wait have jazz speak japanese or chinese! lol they always sound angry anyway in that language
time for the boys! lol more physical here?
oh yeah this is good times!
*gasp* chip so evil! didnt know he had it in him! i love it
best misuse of the ranger suits ever! but so worth it
poor jazz! her heart is broken but at this point she really is better off without daggeron
aww man! she should have left him hanging there
run him over maddie!
oh yeah xander wasnt slapped this episode! i wondered what that gaping feeling in my chest was
you dont deserve her daggeron you jerk!
wow this was drama filled and amazing! told ya id get to the reviews
*shakes bucket* aww im out of popcorn, gotta get more before the next chapter
ooh the plot thickens when evil from without comes in on top of the battle within. i hope that made sense and if it didnt im sorry
You should be happy, your story is the onlyy one I write essays as reviews for. But now onto this ones topic. First off the rangers left something off there cool macabre list of suicides. MAGIC, Jazz is already on her way to being an accomoplished magician. It wouldnt be difficult for her to do something like snuff her life out. No thats Necromancy and I dont think she could handle the awsomeness of death magic. But yeah thats still there. Another thing is there being to nice. If they want to help her then Aly should fight Jazz. If she's loss the will to live then it needs to be beaten into her, a simple, cue intervention won't do crap. She needs to be put in a situation where she has the mega possibility to be killed to rekindle the flame of life.
" If you want to die so badly then stop fighting and accept it! "
" I DON'T WANT TO DIE! "
As I was reading this chapter a vision of my version of Bridge fighting Jazz, which is a certainty for death and Jazz fighting back with all her might in the face of certain death. It sucks what happened to her and Aly but it could have been worse. Aly has risen up and thats good for her. Now it's Jazz's turn. She has to fight and fight hard. Another thing is, well Love is something I hate right now since ive had my heart squashed, five hours ago. But even if I was the god of love I would still beat the crap out of everyone in this fic. The make-outs are annoying. This is why we have hell,lol seriously cause people beat there friends when they tongue wrestle, trust ive seen it. Ive done it. Well thats about it. Can't wait to see what happens next.
... Okay let see if Ive got this straight.Your channeling Tea Gardner fron Yu-Gi-Oh, that much is clear because she is the only one capable of souting such mind numbing self-rightous, please grab a drill gun and go to work on my head lind of speech. People who make those need to be beaten,and beaten again, and then thrown in front of a passing truck. I mean it became apparent that the rangers were mad at Daggeron after the first paragraph. What was the point of everything else. The language part was cool and kind of lame at the same time. Cause they were repeating the same thing over and over and over and over again. Im the only person whose still on Daggerons side, what he did wasnt that bad. If Ally was as tough as she preaches then she could have gotten out. You dont have power over the night and be weak like that, iyt's a contradiction. And what person after being frozen like that wouldnt have the first thing on there mind be " what the hell happened to me " nobody is so holier than thou not to think that. And clearly Daggeron was sorry cause he let all that happen to him, cause there is no way in hell that he couldnt have stopped that. Ally is night and he is day, there powers devour one another and cancell out. If he had summoned the spirit of the dawn he would have negated her power. And of course bear the living daylights out of everyone in the room. But no he let it happen as pennance or whatever word im trying to say. Then theres the fight itself, i think i know where you got it from cause i read the same one to and it pissed me off the same as this, cartoon violence and real life violence does, not, mix. The mental picture I got from this had me shaking, my inner Bridge was writhing in psychotic rage. Needless to say I cant write a mystic force fanfic and wont be able to for awhile. You don't want to know what happened. Ive been reading horror manga for awhile and drew on that ( franken fran ). Using legend form and swat was way overkill. the whole thing was overkill. Keep in mind, this is just business, I wanted to rip Xanders jaw off at that. Arrogant sons of prostitute makers. If there so great then Daggeron should just leave. Then when a monster comes and they have no idea what to do and half the team gets wiped out well, yeah. It's just barbric idiocy is annoying,and long winded self-rightous speeches are no better. If they have issues with being in life and death situations then there in the wrong line of work. and Sky needs some riddilin cause i was reaching for my chainsaw. All in all nice chapter and great series.