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embermoonlight
11/27/11 . chapter 43
UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
kimgray18
12/23/10 . chapter 3
good
Difference-is-normal
10/5/10 . chapter 43
*whines pathetically* I'm dying for an update here! I wanna know what happens! Please update soon! I'm begging ya here!
g2fan
4/14/10 . chapter 2
Hi, I was wondering when there was going to be an update. I hope it's soon Thanks Wendy
tennisgal456
12/8/09 . chapter 43
there is a good hectic? lol i hope things get better for you

sorry my couch doesnt have anything in it except lint

see i told you i would get to the reviews, sorry it took so long, but i hope the reviews make up for it

if jack didnt answer, how did bridge get through? does it just pick up automatically

but the toast is so *wiggles fingers towards mouth* buttery lol

second phone call? i thought she didnt make it for fear of not being able to get any sleep

clare might be angry at nick for a good while now for interrupting their moment

no one is happy to be woken in the middle of the night

if they are all meeting without jazz, how are they going to make sure she doesnt hurt herself

at least maddie answers with a little decency, or maybe she was too tired to be rude and upset

at least sky and allie are going to have something to take their minds off of the sexual tension for a while

hey i learned a new acronym today! lol always something new

sky could have just picked alli up and carried her to the car

yay more xander possibility of slapping! lol sorry but i just love it so much, it ties the whole thing together for me

did that mean transport material? im so good lol

oh look they finally got it! lol took em long enough, i just hope there arent any serious repercussions because of it

she needs an intervention

wow and alli too, so deep and emotional here

operation stalk jazz for her own good is now in operational mode

its gonna be hard to save jazz, someone can kill themselves in virtually any way

lol xander wetting himself would be so hilarious ROTFL

so xander hates alli all the time? lol he hates her when she is right

lol so muh for syd and jack and their rides home

thank goodness chip was there to offer assistance

ask them to stop? *gasp* what a revolutionary idea haha

gotta love the bluntness that is alli

sucks to be bridge right then

i bet it can get heavier, come on it is you we are talking about here

i want more! lol

keep it up
tennisgal456
12/8/09 . chapter 42
wow you werent kidding when you said you had to break it in two (my hands are smoking from typing so much) lol

thats right! the longer the better, it just means you get a longer review too

sequels are awesome! i approve of that thought

lookout? *pulls out sniper rifle with night scope* oh yeah im ready! lets do this thing

psh yeah daggeron and you cant have her back, no one needs you

leelee? yuck lol i forgot about her, things are gonna get worse then, and of course her mom is gonna take all the credit for the evil knowledge

oh so not cool! why cant we have pizza at that price, lol so jealous here

pizza delivery boy with an attitude. only you! lol gotta love it

ive never seen guys talk to eachother so much in my life, lol so uncommon

lol and not as human and not as hygienic, but you get the idea

nice history lesson and story time from the guys

there was pizza left? *gasp* those boys are a disgrace to guyhood, leaving food leftover like that

bad place for bridge to be right now, he needs some dampeners or something to be around those guys

wow that is really deep. i never would have guessed jazz went through all that

is jazz gonna try to do it now? she wouldnt please say no

tell someone who can watch out for jazz! do something *ugh* so antsy and frustrated and ... *screams* so much drama rama

ugh that is mushy, i was gonna puke

ah the whole is filled, but only halfway because xander wasnt actually slapped, but bridge eased the pain by mentioning that he thought about it

lol bridge is just exhausted im sure, but narcolepsy could be possible

yeah xander liked that

like their yelling didnt wake bridge up

at least while some relationships, ok just one, are breaking apart, others are becoming stronger

their thoughts are pretty much parallel, lol i wonder if they have any idea how good they are for eachother yet. eh probably not

BARNEY? AUGH THE HORROR! THE NIGHTMARES THAT ENSUE! sorry *ahem* bad memories

and just when they were trying to forget feelings, they become more confusing

they just need to suck it up and get together

or not? no jazz no!

*releases breath i didnt even realize i was holding* phew good timing maddie, bust the door down!

lol maddie is like jazzs personal guardian angel and she doesnt even know it

calm down maddie, its ok they arent doing anything all that bad

so maddie knows what jazz wrote? i hope she can help her in time

lol poor bridge and his burning eyes, he will neve see clearly again

it is uber bad if bridge felt it through the morpher link

wow...heavy stuff here and the bad guys havent even showed up

love it and you tend to take my breath away

keep it up
tennisgal456
12/8/09 . chapter 41
*dun dun da dun!* lol im here and have a huge bowl of popcorn right here! yum! lol ready to read my review?

more drama? is that even possible? haha jk

im so excited it is updated! i will never leave, patience is one of my many specialties

I hope your life becomes better and more manageable

lol first and foremost i love the chapter title

alli was just running on adrenaline i guess after all that happened though, who can blame her

lol the lynching of daggeron! i am so in *pitchfork and burning torch suddenly appear* what? too old fashioned? ok *pulls out wand and blow torch* heheh

but shouldnt the most violent be saved for last? lol after all you have to work up to it as the greatest grand finale ever

go girls go! lol ROTFL i love this so much you dont even know

syd needs metal stat! lol she should keep some handy at all times

is syd gonna use her fist or does it just make her feel better?

focus people! eating daggeron alive remmeber? good job getting back on track v

hey dont hurt bridge he is just enjoying his girlfriend in her fit of anger

anyone else want to break out in foreign language? syd why dont you speak french?

OMG i cant believe you did go french fro syd! lol i was just saying but i guess our minds are just so similar. that is crazy stuff

nice, the entire cultures of the world are here with the girls, wait have jazz speak japanese or chinese! lol they always sound angry anyway in that language

time for the boys! lol more physical here?

oh yeah this is good times!

*gasp* chip so evil! didnt know he had it in him! i love it

best misuse of the ranger suits ever! but so worth it

poor jazz! her heart is broken but at this point she really is better off without daggeron

aww man! she should have left him hanging there

run him over maddie!

oh yeah xander wasnt slapped this episode! i wondered what that gaping feeling in my chest was

you dont deserve her daggeron you jerk!

wow this was drama filled and amazing! told ya id get to the reviews

*shakes bucket* aww im out of popcorn, gotta get more before the next chapter

ooh the plot thickens when evil from without comes in on top of the battle within. i hope that made sense and if it didnt im sorry

keep it up
Gotta Dance 88
11/25/09 . chapter 43
*winces* I do not see this ending well. I'm sorry, but interfering like that just creates resentment.

Keep up the good work!
thunderyoshi
11/16/09 . chapter 43
Bloody hell man, this is AWESOME! And so long, I freaking LOVE it! Keep up the great work!
Gotta Dance 88
11/13/09 . chapter 42
Poor Daggeron. I feel so bad for him.

Dang, that was intense between Sky and Allie. Whoo!

And Xander and Vida were cute as always. :)

Keep up the good work!
Kyoshiro-Crimson-King
11/12/09 . chapter 43
You should be happy, your story is the onlyy one I write essays as reviews for. But now onto this ones topic. First off the rangers left something off there cool macabre list of suicides. MAGIC, Jazz is already on her way to being an accomoplished magician. It wouldnt be difficult for her to do something like snuff her life out. No thats Necromancy and I dont think she could handle the awsomeness of death magic. But yeah thats still there. Another thing is there being to nice. If they want to help her then Aly should fight Jazz. If she's loss the will to live then it needs to be beaten into her, a simple, cue intervention won't do crap. She needs to be put in a situation where she has the mega possibility to be killed to rekindle the flame of life.

" If you want to die so badly then stop fighting and accept it! "

" I DON'T WANT TO DIE! "

As I was reading this chapter a vision of my version of Bridge fighting Jazz, which is a certainty for death and Jazz fighting back with all her might in the face of certain death. It sucks what happened to her and Aly but it could have been worse. Aly has risen up and thats good for her. Now it's Jazz's turn. She has to fight and fight hard. Another thing is, well Love is something I hate right now since ive had my heart squashed, five hours ago. But even if I was the god of love I would still beat the crap out of everyone in this fic. The make-outs are annoying. This is why we have hell,lol seriously cause people beat there friends when they tongue wrestle, trust ive seen it. Ive done it. Well thats about it. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Aims5
11/12/09 . chapter 43
love it!

Aims5;)
Kyoshiro-Crimson-King
11/11/09 . chapter 41
... Okay let see if Ive got this straight.Your channeling Tea Gardner fron Yu-Gi-Oh, that much is clear because she is the only one capable of souting such mind numbing self-rightous, please grab a drill gun and go to work on my head lind of speech. People who make those need to be beaten,and beaten again, and then thrown in front of a passing truck. I mean it became apparent that the rangers were mad at Daggeron after the first paragraph. What was the point of everything else. The language part was cool and kind of lame at the same time. Cause they were repeating the same thing over and over and over and over again. Im the only person whose still on Daggerons side, what he did wasnt that bad. If Ally was as tough as she preaches then she could have gotten out. You dont have power over the night and be weak like that, iyt's a contradiction. And what person after being frozen like that wouldnt have the first thing on there mind be " what the hell happened to me " nobody is so holier than thou not to think that. And clearly Daggeron was sorry cause he let all that happen to him, cause there is no way in hell that he couldnt have stopped that. Ally is night and he is day, there powers devour one another and cancell out. If he had summoned the spirit of the dawn he would have negated her power. And of course bear the living daylights out of everyone in the room. But no he let it happen as pennance or whatever word im trying to say. Then theres the fight itself, i think i know where you got it from cause i read the same one to and it pissed me off the same as this, cartoon violence and real life violence does, not, mix. The mental picture I got from this had me shaking, my inner Bridge was writhing in psychotic rage. Needless to say I cant write a mystic force fanfic and wont be able to for awhile. You don't want to know what happened. Ive been reading horror manga for awhile and drew on that ( franken fran ). Using legend form and swat was way overkill. the whole thing was overkill. Keep in mind, this is just business, I wanted to rip Xanders jaw off at that. Arrogant sons of prostitute makers. If there so great then Daggeron should just leave. Then when a monster comes and they have no idea what to do and half the team gets wiped out well, yeah. It's just barbric idiocy is annoying,and long winded self-rightous speeches are no better. If they have issues with being in life and death situations then there in the wrong line of work. and Sky needs some riddilin cause i was reaching for my chainsaw. All in all nice chapter and great series.
Aims5
11/10/09 . chapter 42
OMG! that's scary.

Aims5;)
Gotta Dance 88
11/10/09 . chapter 41
*blinks rapidly, and quite honestly can't think of anything to say* Wow. That was...ouch. That had to hurt. A lot.

Off to the next chapter!
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