Bloody hell man, this is AWESOME!! And so long, I freaking LOVE it! Keep up the great work!

Poor Daggeron. I feel so bad for him.
Dang, that was intense between Sky and Allie. Whoo!
And Xander and Vida were cute as always. :)
Keep up the good work!

You should be happy, your story is the onlyy one I write essays as reviews for. But now onto this ones topic. First off the rangers left something off there cool macabre list of suicides. MAGIC, Jazz is already on her way to being an accomoplished magician. It wouldnt be difficult for her to do something like snuff her life out. No thats Necromancy and I dont think she could handle the awsomeness of death magic. But yeah thats still there. Another thing is there being to nice. If they want to help her then Aly should fight Jazz. If she's loss the will to live then it needs to be beaten into her, a simple, cue intervention won't do crap. She needs to be put in a situation where she has the mega possibility to be killed to rekindle the flame of life.

" If you want to die so badly then stop fighting and accept it!! "

" I DON'T WANT TO DIE! "

As I was reading this chapter a vision of my version of Bridge fighting Jazz, which is a certainty for death and Jazz fighting back with all her might in the face of certain death. It sucks what happened to her and Aly but it could have been worse. Aly has risen up and thats good for her. Now it's Jazz's turn. She has to fight and fight hard. Another thing is, well Love is something I hate right now since ive had my heart squashed, five hours ago. But even if I was the god of love I would still beat the crap out of everyone in this fic. The make-outs are annoying. This is why we have hell,lol seriously cause people beat there friends when they tongue wrestle, trust ive seen it. Ive done it. Well thats about it. Can't wait to see what happens next.

love it!
Aims5;)

... Okay let see if Ive got this straight.Your channeling Tea Gardner fron Yu-Gi-Oh, that much is clear because she is the only one capable of souting such mind numbing self-rightous, please grab a drill gun and go to work on my head lind of speech. People who make those need to be beaten,and beaten again, and then thrown in front of a passing truck. I mean it became apparent that the rangers were mad at Daggeron after the first paragraph. What was the point of everything else. The language part was cool and kind of lame at the same time. Cause they were repeating the same thing over and over and over and over again. Im the only person whose still on Daggerons side, what he did wasnt that bad. If Ally was as tough as she preaches then she could have gotten out. You dont have power over the night and be weak like that, iyt's a contradiction. And what person after being frozen like that wouldnt have the first thing on there mind be " what the hell happened to me " nobody is so holier than thou not to think that. And clearly Daggeron was sorry cause he let all that happen to him, cause there is no way in hell that he couldnt have stopped that. Ally is night and he is day, there powers devour one another and cancell out. If he had summoned the spirit of the dawn he would have negated her power. And of course bear the living daylights out of everyone in the room. But no he let it happen as pennance or whatever word im trying to say. Then theres the fight itself, i think i know where you got it from cause i read the same one to and it ** me off the same as this, cartoon violence and real life violence does, not, mix. The mental picture I got from this had me shaking, my inner Bridge was writhing in psychotic rage. Needless to say I cant write a mystic force fanfic and wont be able to for awhile. You don't want to know what happened. Ive been reading horror manga for awhile and drew on that ( franken fran ). Using legend form and swat was way overkill. the whole thing was overkill. Keep in mind, this is just business, I wanted to rip Xanders jaw off at that. Arrogant sons of prostitute makers. If there so great then Daggeron should just leave. Then when a monster comes and they have no idea what to do and half the team gets wiped out well, yeah. It's just barbric idiocy is annoying,and long winded self-rightous speeches are no better. If they have issues with being in life and death situations then there in the wrong line of work. and Sky needs some riddilin cause i was reaching for my chainsaw. All in all nice chapter and great series.

OMG! that's scary.
Aims5;)

*blinks rapidly, and quite honestly can't think of anything to say* Wow. That was...ouch. That had to hurt. A lot.
Off to the next chapter!

Bloody hell, I look away for two minutes and you've got about 100 pages for me to read! :P

OMG, poor Jazz, I hope that her and Daggeron can sort things out!!

I loved the Sky and Alli part, it was funny as hell!

Okay I feel the need to comment on this. This is a very good fic, I like the plot of it, for the most part. As a gay man there are somethings that don't interest me.

anyway why are the rangers so bipolar. I like being sadistic and bloodthirsty just the same as the next person but they do it an annoying kind of way, I mean I find myself wanting to massecher them instead of the person there all angry at, especialy Syd. I mean was what Daggeron did really that bad? that kind of training seems pretty beginnerish, not to difficult.

Another thing is the room of light. extremely cool concept, but why couldnt Alli break out of it. I mean she sounds so bad-** but to be caught like that. I mean her element is darkness right?, light and darkness are two sides of the same coin, people who manipulate one, have a slight connection to the other.

Also what is night magic exactly? I understand darkness controll, shadow manipulation and stuff light that, but controling stars is more heaven magic, celestial stuff

Also what can the others, aside from Alli and Jazz being OC children of the writers do, I don't see them fairing to well against the ancient warrior, like I said about OC'S, ignoring the fact that the sun dispells the night. If he really wanted to go all out he could crush the SPD rangers, the mystic force ones could put him through his paces with there legend modes, but in the end he'd probably still win.

Wow I did not intend for this review to be so long, and I am certainly not flaming you or anything like that, just expressing my oppinion. I really like Alli and Jazz. can't wait to see what happens next

I loved the scene between Sky and Alli!! They are so cute together!
Ouch, Daggeron is going to die a slow and painful death if he's not careful.
Keep up the good work!

Hey, you weren't joking when you said it was drama-packed! So it looks like the secret's out between Sky and Alli and I sure wouldn't want to be Daggeron right now after everything that happened.

I can sense there's still a lot more to come, i'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Loved this chapter!

Daggeron's in a bit of a hole, isn't he? LOL.

yes im here, and as usual neglecting all the other reviews that i need to catch up on, you must love me! ;p lol
leaning towards drama? oh honey we have been on the edge for quite some time now

of course it works when sky says it, they are meant to be together,lol
lol and the day was saved by...dun dun da du... Sunglasses!! lol it figures sky would have a pair on hand
man why does it always take a near death experience for someone to realize their true feelings for someone? lol so like sky
would alli gain more energy more quickly if she wore the sunglasses to block out the light?
aww there is the little tough girl who doesnt take flak from anyone, she recovers quickly, but daggeron probably wont be as fortunate
im surprised none of the other rangers have burst in
i wonder how all this will turn out in the end, so many relationships are going to be altered permanently

xander just yell? no all of you need to wail on him at the same time! woah the other rangers thought xander had a good idea for once, im sure he will write that in his diary
hehe the rangers need to chill, they are all angry and prone to snap, its like they are all super pmssing
at least we know alli feels well enough to crack jokes and get furious
lol nick is going to need some maddie therapy later for all that he has seen
aw come on guys, it only takes one person to take alli to a room
all of the others are going to come to regret jazzs magical skills, lol she is a sneaky little devil
oh like jazz is one to talk, especially since she just got through spying herself
faux pas? what is that?
ah even in turmoil we manage to get some xander bashing, all is well with the world
lol OMG that episdoe with bridge made me about wet myself, ok sorry that was kind of gross
thats not cool! the chair didnt even get judgement! lol
v is like an addict to gossip, she has to have her share and no one is going to kkeep her from it
hehe the downfall of the guys are the girls! but of course, who else do they have to fear?
jack is just jealous no one was there to seduce him out of his decision
ah hell hath no fury like a woman scorned
um wouldnt they know that they are home since jenji just announced it over the intercom??
i cannot believe the gall of daggeron, he so neds to be punished

lol no the power is definitely not helping him
well i got this done quickly and i shame myself for having so many others to review
until then
keep it up

Seriously. This is freaking AWESOME. Every chapter just gets better!

Alli's power is so cool!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Cliffhanger! WHY??
Just kidding. What a great chapter! It was good to see all the Mystic Rangers' powers, and now, we get to see if Sky really believes he can save Alli.
Keep up the good work!