 WhiteLadyDragon 2008-05-11 . chapter 1WELL! This story reminds me of those actiony R-rated movies that my parents watch late at night! Avvy and Zorak are just a couple of criminal lovers in the first degree, aren't they? Like Bonnie and Clyde, or Billie Joe and Bobbie Sue! Go on, take the bonies and run!
Overall, I applaud you.
PS: I saw your artwork for this. It looked just like a geniune movie poster! |