I enjoyed this. I especially liked that she punched Atton and then how they ended the chapter... it was fun.

It's very well written as well. With just enough variation from the game to keep it interesting, but realistic at the same time.

I seriously doubt if exile Exile would punch Atton in the face but you are the author, after after all.

but you are the author after all.

Brilliantly written, very intense. I love the intensity you seem to give all your situations and the characters' thoughts as they try to survive them.

Five stars.:|