This is brilliant. Absolutely genius. I can't wait to get to the end of it.

Brilliant story, loved it.

On to the Firefly one now. Honestly, I found the Firefly one in a search for crossovers, and went to read this one first since it said the other one was a sequel to this. So I've been looking forward to the Firefly one... will go read that now, actually, heh.

Hm... and what would have happened if John had given Jack the ring instead, I wonder?

Y'know, when I read the bit about the watch, I started thinking something totally else... but I am obcessed with Chameleon Archs (and the Master, is he in this? Nevermind, I'll keep reading to find out).

Loving this story.

I really enjoy this story. Not many people can pull off a really good crossover, but you did. I love how you have written the relationship between Jack and Ianto. They are so cute together! Also, I laughed every time I read about John. Captain Union Jack. lol
I like all the Marvel characters you used. Especially Tony Stark. Love Iron Man!
I hope there is a sequel to this story. Firefly/Torchwood would certainly be interesting.

Just bumped into your story and i'm totally loving the crossover!

Wow!

Great ending! And "Serenity in Cardiff" is good too.

Gambit!

and Nightcrawler! Yay!

...I was thinking about Roma. In the CB mythology, Roma is Merlyn's daughter, right?

So if Merlyn is the Doctor... maybe Roma is Jenny? Just an idea. I'm probably thinking too much about this, as usual.
Fantastic story by the way!

Oh... sneaky Kyhl/Ianto... using a perception filter like that...

good story.

No WAY!

Kyhl... is future!Ianto? That's...

I never would have seen that coming. That's inspired.

(excellent story btw)

Dear NightsDawne,
After reading 14 chapters of your story, I am happy to say that I have stopped lurking and am finally making my first comment. I am new to , but I am an avid reader.
I love the combination of Torchwood, X-Men and marvel. I think that your skills as a writer are way above average. I would buy this book! You are doing great at weaving the story, dealing with may characters and building the tension. I am looking forward to reading your other works. I like the way that you split up the sections with the line to keep the scenes seperate. The only thing that I am a little out of my depth is the Merlyn and mythology, but I think Ianto is explaining it quite well :) You describe the scenery and setting very well and I think that your dialog is brlliant. There is alot of cross stories going on and it could get complicated but you are easy to follow. BRAVO!
Thanks for the experience, enjoyment and fun,
QuaintHeart

Charming, witty, funny, entertaining, sexy, intriguing, pleasure to read story! Love your characterizations and inclusion of Mutants and magic -- can't wait to see more from you!

Thank you for sharing!

Cher

I don't know what Jack's thinking. What would he want a companion for when he's got Ianto. Although...a 3-way? OK, forget the companion. How about Jayne? That was Mal's ship that showed up, right? Loved this story and I really hope you do the sequel. So hurry up with those DVD's and lets go.
Judy

I turn my back on my email for five minutes, and you go and finish your story...but damn, what a finish!

And Firefly! *fangirly squeal* That was a brilliant little plug there...just brilliant.

Can't wait!

I loved this a ridiculous amount. It combined all my favourite things.