I normally don't like Rock since he seems to come off as too much of a party boy, but your story may have put him in a more positive light for me. After all, your descriptions of him were lovely, and Muffy certainly seems happy.

Kudos!

~ Peace and Love

It was cute. I'm also gald you didn't make Jack like the ulitiment bad guy to boo at. The last couple paragraphs were sweet, the fireworks metaphor was written well. I also enjoy the RockxMuffy idea, tis cute. The tag thing made me laugh, it seemed Rock like. Anywho, very good.

I loved it~