this was cute

please right more it was getting good

Aw, that was really cute!

I loved how the little sister said her first word, giving the baby at the same time his name. Nicely written!

AW! THATS SO CUTE!

Awaii,

Aww, this's a very interesting and sweet story. I loved Tsukiko's first word! Briliant!

I was glad to see that Tsukiko's inherited her father's intelligence, and I absolutely adore her! The close bond that she shares with her father has clearly demonstrated how much she takes after him, and how much he loves her. Aww... I'm swooning over this story since I can't pick Tsukiko up and swoon over her.

It was also great seeing Shikamaru's laid back attitude extended to great tolerance (love, in fact, I'd say) of Temari's nature. Oh that spoke volumes about their relationship. It was a harmonious picture of a warm, loving, ideal family, which I've no doubt they'll create if they finally end up together.

Thanks so much, Awaii, for a well thought out and heartwarming story :D

Aiko; ai = love. ko = child. Aiko = Love child Need a lesson in japanese? bright boy...? maybe you meant Akira? No, it's Akio, I looked it up for you. Will you bother fixing the story?

Great fic, I loved it. and good luck with the contest (I'm in it too).

Such a cute story! I love that his sister named him. ^_^

Hey, I just wanted to give you a couple pointers. Instead of this sentence, "began rubbing a whitish roller over her stomach, then looked at a screen" you should say something more like: "The Suna sonographer then began to roll the transducer over her stomach while keeping an intent eye on the monitor. Temari definitely felt the pressure but she was more concerned with the her child. "So..?" She asked... and so on. I hope that helps, I actually work in an obgyn office so I felt compelled to at least let you know what the technical words were. I like your story and the name, good luck with the contest!

this has to be the best one i have read so far for the contest!! great job :) good luck!

That's awsome best I've read yet...

aww~!
its so cute!

Its very cute, I really like it. good luck in the contest