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| King Caspian the Seafarer 2008-06-04 ch 1,  | abuseWhat a fic! I was sniffing at the end. Poor Helen. I'm glad Edmund came 'round and gave her a hug. Great job! KC |
| Sara Wolfe 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is sweet. |
| Truth Teller 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseRedundant. I, unlike many other readers, can only stand the same story ideas so many times. |
| HarryHermione3 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseAww thats cute, thats the kind of ending I always hoped for with the pevensies you know. I definitly liked how they re-connect instead of Edmund being way out there and still hate her. Good job. |
| Miss Pookamonga 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseThat was absolutely beautiful. And I'd love to think that the voice in Helen's head is Aslan, even if you didn't mean for it to be. But again, absolutely beautiful. Luv, Miss Pookamonga ;-p |
| Ilada'Jefiv 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseAww! So sweet! Wonderful job! ~Ila |
| Val Evenstar 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is nice - a good little one-shot. It's nice that Helen's expectations, at least when it came to Edmund, were dissappointed, which showed how much he'd changed. |
| KCS 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseAw, so sweet! |
| the1hobbit 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseVery cute! Just lovely! Will defintly be faved! I'd like to see more, or even this expanded! I'm a sucker for mush! :D |