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siobhan.22 9/22/12 . chapter 10Good story so far, please continue |
Kountry101 2/19/12 . chapter 10Please update soon! _ |
nokoamna 2/27/11 . chapter 10I LOVE this story! Hope you update soon! |
kitttman 1/26/11 . chapter 10i love your story :) |
ChamberlinofMusic 12/29/10 . chapter 10I adore this fic between the two and where it's going! I can't wait to see what happens to Pepper and Tony next! |
butters608 12/9/10 . chapter 2ok so i can't review on the most recent chapter because of some dumb crap that says that you can't review a chapter you've already reviewed. ANYWAY remember when you used to actually write and update this story? yea me too -.- |
call me Milo 11/29/10 . chapter 7Justice League? Tony Stark made the Avengers, not the Justice League. Besides that little thing I like the story. I just had to comment on that... Milo |
Sapsparrow13 11/7/10 . chapter 10 Ah yes, the tension continues to build! I'm on the edge of my seat! How will Pepper decide? What will Tony say? AND what will he do to those guys who bruised Pepper? Please update! |
XxThe Penny TreasurexX 11/3/10 . chapter 10Aw poor Pepper:) That must have been embarrassing. I loved te chapter! Please update soon! |
butters608 11/3/10 . chapter 10 too lazy to log in lol. i just realized i never read the ending of this chapter! i like it :D UPDATE MORE |
writingmonkey10 10/11/10 . chapter 9Yikes! This is getting so intense! Loved those last two chapters and I'm definitely about to pass out which means you're going to have to update soon or I just might die. I loved that Tony noticed the bruise and wouldn't let it go but someone needs to find out and take care of this wack job that's out to get Tony! AGH! Update soon please! xoxo writingmonkey10 |
writingmonkey10 10/11/10 . chapter 7Everything was going great and I was going "Awww!" and then BAM. The end happens and I'm like - wait a minute, YOU CAN'T EFFING KILL PEPPER! this was a great chapter and I'm SO glad I found this! Everything is written so well, I can visualize what's going on, fell with everyone - the dream at the beginning and that scene was delicate yet perfectly formed and written. You are AMAZING! |
writingmonkey10 10/11/10 . chapter 3This was perfect - Tony taking care of her like that. It was so sweet and completely believable that he would do something like that behind the scenes for her. It shows just how much he really cares and that she isn't just another girl he's going to run after but someone he actually loves. I loved this so much! Why am I just finding this now? AHG! It's so perfect and I love it so much! |
writingmonkey10 10/11/10 . chapter 2This was really good and to mean it seemed to go well with the previous chapter. The idea was interesting - a simply dialogue short thing and I for one loved it! Great idea to incorporate it into a full length fic! |
writingmonkey10 10/11/10 . chapter 1I'm trying too - Pepper. The ending was perfect - err...for this chapter I mean. Don't end this fic quite yet ;) Off to read the next chapter! |