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| Lord-Strath 2008-09-01 ch 3,  | abuseAwesome chapter, really love where the story is going ^ , ^, can not wait to see what happens next. |
| Aura-sasaki 2008-07-19 ch 2, | abuseI really like reading this particular story of yours. I find the plot really unique and interesting. I especially like the way you end your chapters; leaving me with a taste of the character's final overpowering emotion. I really feel for Tayuya in this fanfic. You've portraid her in a much more likeable fashion that we can empathise with then the original Tayuya in Naruto. well done sacchan. ^-^ Update soon and ill move my ** on with the comic. No really...i will. I can almost hear the 'yeah, right' that's probabally resounding in your head right now. |
| Lord-Strath 2008-07-07 ch 2, | abuseAwesome chapter once again ^^, A tad bit too short for my taste but potent and direct. Am really feeling sorry for Tayuya right now since you captured her astral self so well. |
| Nonya 2008-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abusePLease continue the story. very good. |
| Lord-Strath 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abusePlease...please continue this ^ ^, it is an awesome story worthy of fanart XD |
| Music-Warrior-Nightsong 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseI never wanted Tayuya to die, but her Haunting Temari, is even better then if she lived. Hope Temari knows a Soul Reaper. (no, I don't want you to put Bleach in this story, but if you did, I'd still read) But ya, this is a really good idea! |
| sco23 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseI wonder how Temari is going to deal with Tayuya's ghost. |
| hhgbh 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseWhoo! Creepy. I hope Temari knows a good exorcist. But seriously, this looks really good. I look forward to seeing where the story goes. |