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| SnowsShadows 2008-08-27 ch 3, | abuseI like it... Hey, i'll be waiting for more. |
| Uzumaki Kushina 2008-08-05 ch 3, | abuseAwsome! I really enjoy reading this story!! Please updates as soon as you can ^.^ |
| XxHyper ChildxX 2008-07-12 ch 3, | abuseI love it!! Update! |
| Hana-Takahashi 2008-07-11 ch 3, | abuseAwesome!! Please write more soon!! |
| AzamiUchiha 2008-06-30 ch 3, | abuseThis story is quite interesting, I'd like to see how it develops. |
| xXDeadly.RoseXx 2008-06-26 ch 3, | abusethat was a gud^^ can't wait for the next chapter^^ wonder y tat Cam guy called her, but I am jumping to conclusions again.. Looking forward to the next chapter^^ |
| Lucracia 2008-06-12 ch 2, | abuseAnd Again I say write more!! |
| Lucracia 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseHey!! Write more damnit!! This story is great!! |
| xXDeadly.RoseXx 2008-05-27 ch 2, | abuseI love your story. It's so good and creative. It's probably one of the best stories I have ever read ^^ I would be looking forward to the updates ^^ so please update soon ^^ |
| Dria-Chan 2008-05-24 ch 2, | abusewOOt! i luff this! cant wait till u update! |
| Lady Maybelle of Confusion 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseHiya... PLEASE CONTINUE OR I WILL HUNT U DOWN...jk. I LUV this. Really, i do. Please continue. Like, really. I love corina...like, luv luv. SHE IS AWESOME JUST LIKE U... favorite sections: "CORINA-SAN!!” Tobi yelps into my ear. I nearly drop my precious phone. “OH! TOBI IS SORRY! WILL CORINA-SAN EVER FORGIVE HIM?” “Yes, She can-I mean, yes, I can forgive you,” I say, smacking myself for nearly talking in third person. “Oh. Tobi is happy, then! …Corina-san?” “Yes?” “Can Tobi ask a question?” ‘Sure.” “What were you doing when Tobi came over?” Tobi chirps. “Oh…I was talking to my friends from my old high school.” “OH! TOBI UNDERSTANDS NOW!” Tobi says, nodding his head and bouncing on his heels. “Well…I’m glad.” Silence. “Corina-san, Tobi wants you to meet Tobi’s friends!” Tobi says excitedly, clapping his hands together in little boy glee. “Umm…well….’ “Please Corina-san?? Tobi promises it will be so much fun!” ‘I would really love to, Tobi, but I’m busy.” Tobi’s whole manner droops. “Does…Corina…san…not…want…to…hang…out…with…Tobi…” I began to panic. “Ah-no-that’s not it-I-just promised one of my teachers-I would-do something for him-that’s all,’ I say, waving my hands. “Oh. Well, will Corina-san meet Tobi’s friends tomorrow??” Tobi asks, cheerful again. “I would like too, yes,’ I say, smiling. “And I will, if I’m available.” “YEAH! TOBI IS HAPPY NOW!” Tobi crushes me in a tight hug. “Tobi-can’t-breath-“ I gasp. Tobi releases me. “Corina-san…” “Yes Tobi?” I ask. “Will you be my friend?? All my other friends can be mean sometimes…even Deidara-senpai…” Poor boy…I thought. I smile up at the hyper-active teenage. “Sure, Tobi. I’ll be friends with you.” “YEAH! CORINA-SAN IS TOBI’S NEW FRIEND! DEIDARA-SENPAI! TOBI HAS A NEW FRIEND!!” Tobi dances off, screaming our new friendship to the world. I smile slightly, and turn back to my phone and food. Well…I haven’t broken the first rule yet. Tobi’s not an **… OK maybe he is slightly…but not on purpose…yeah…" CONTINUE OR I WILL MAKE SURE U NEVER SEE DAYLIGHT AGAIN... lol jk i LUV u! Ur best friend, May-chan |
| Bonbon the Cat 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseI acctualy found that kinda funny. ^^ Good job, can't wait till the next chapter. |