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Hotgirlow
2009-11-19 . chapter 2
update soon it's great.
knitchick
2009-11-11 . chapter 2
I really like your story so far and can't wait to see him stick it to Snape and Dumbles. Thankfully, since he's smarter, he hopefully won't make friends with that red headed idiot Ron.

Looking forward to more!
Miss Mercury101
2009-10-31 . chapter 2
I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. You've got a fantastic storyline going on here so please, please update. Your writing is wonderful and I'm very interested in knowing what's going to happen.
The Unicorn
2009-10-30 . chapter 2
Very nice, nice to see a story where Fudge isn't a complete moron and where there is actually some logic explaining Dumbledore's actions.

Looking forward to more of this
CootiePatootie
2009-10-28 . chapter 2
Once again I re-read these two wonderful chapters. This one, more than almost any other HP story out there right now, has me thinking, "but what happens next?" I am impressed with the amount of detail you have packed into these two chapters. I look forward to more about Harry as Iuchi Harry, and what that means for his actions and reactions whilst in Britain. I look forward to learning more about the lives of our Canon favorites (!) especially the Weasley's (I have to admit that I do not subscribe to the wholesale Weasley hatred that sometimes grips the HP community, and I think the death of Ginny would have had a profound impact on the family).

I look forward to the answer to some questions raised by these two chapters: what potions was Albus referring to? Love to see the reaction to that little nugget of information...
What happened to the shade of Tom Riddle if Ginny did die in the Chamber? (presumably her death would have been all that was needed to fully reincorporate the Diary).
I am also curious as to whether or not this story will incorporate Horcruxes (Horcruces?)

Anyway, as with your other stories, this is a cut above much of the dross that litters the fanfic world. I eagerly await an update.

Cheers,

Cassie
noylj
2009-10-25 . chapter 1
This story seriously needs to be updated.
thanks.
what are you even saying
2009-10-25 . chapter 2
This is an excellent start, I have to admit. I've read many fics that share a few details with this, but none with a truly high degree of similarity. I'm impressed so far.

Looking forward to more.
Cateagle
2009-10-25 . chapter 2
Heh, methinks this is going to get very interesting and that Albus is going to find himself peculiarly disadvantaged and not understand why. I do like the various move and counter-moves and I suspect Voldemort is not going to get near the information he hopes for from Harry's mind; likewise, I suspect he won't get as much cooperation from Harry as he wishes, either. It's shaping up to be a wild ride and I'm looking forward to future chapters. An owl named "Pasteur"? Might Hermione Granger be wanting to get in touch with Harry about what he'll find at Hogwarts? That could definitely have all sorts of repurcussiions for various folk (I suspect it might well rule out Gryffindor for Harry on several counts).
SuperiorShortness
2009-10-13 . chapter 2
Absolutely BRILLIANT! I hope this continues with a new chapter soon!
omathop
2009-10-08 . chapter 2
Please update soon
Tentrees
2009-10-06 . chapter 2
Love IT! Wantmore of it soon!
taintedlegacy
2009-10-03 . chapter 2
Can't wait to see what happens next! I really hope you don't abandon this story!
Escape my reality
2009-09-29 . chapter 2
this story is amazing! you HAVE to update. please.
deitarion/SSokolow
2009-09-24 . chapter 2
I hope you continue this. You do a much better job on this kind of story than most other people whose work I've read and I'm looking forward to seeing your Dumbledore get his comeuppance.
odonata617
2009-08-30 . chapter 2
Please, I am tired of reading and re-reading these two marvelous chapters. How about another?
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