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| animaluvr123 2008-07-24 ch 1,  | abuseI LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR, UPDATE SOON PLEASE! |
| SiriusBlackIsGod 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseLove angry!Harry and manipulative!Dumbledore. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. |
| Calebkir 2008-07-17 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, I'd like to see how this goes... |
| CordeliaHunter 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abuseA good story. I liked the involvement of a Japanese character in the story. It is believable that Harry learned meditation from her. I'm adding this story to my Story Alert list, so I'll be there to read the next chapter when it comes out. |
| john 2008-07-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseUpdate! |
| doRodrigo 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseGreat |
| im100HPGWandRWHG 2008-06-29 ch 1, | abuseGood story. Any plans on continue the story? |
| Findoras 2008-06-28 ch 1, | abuseA good read so far; keep it up :D I liked the ending, where u shifted quickly from perspective to perspective. It reminded me of the end of a 24 episode where they flash to all the different concurrent storylines. I know it wouldn't be effective all the time in writing, but it was a nice change. I'm looking forward to reading more. I honestly don't think that Dumbledore would authorise the action that was taken against Remus, Sirius and his wife, but for this story, it fits. Your writing is good, neither oversimplified or complicated; very little noticeable errors in the formatting/text. Hope to see more :D (Hope i don't sound too preachy; just trying to give a constructive review) |
| Rubel 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. Very Interesting. I definitly want to see where you take this. So did any of the events in the first 4 books happen? |
| Anaelisa 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseExcellent story! What Dumbledore thinking? Order to kill Harry's family? and then ask for his help? England is in trouble, a lot of trouble. Please update soon. |
| snape504 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseI Love it! More, please! I am adding you to my alert list. Debby |
| Lyonnyte 2008-06-19 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! |
| Firgof Raina 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseOh wow. England really messed up. I think I have only seen Dumbldore more evil and stupid once. Just a thought, but I think Harry might be pissed. |
| hpfananita 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutly brilliant start to your story, Its got so much potential, I cant wait until your next chapter. Adding it to my C2, hoping we dont have to wait too long for an update, hint hint lol. |
| FoschiaFreak-17 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseI like it! update soon. |