That was quite touching, I really liked that. Instant kudos!

Wowzers, that was surprisingly short...but it was still nice! Very, very sweet. I hope to read as to why Hiei was with this girl and how he got so emotionally attatched to her.

Another thing. Although it was a very nice story, maybe it would help a bit if you added more detail? The story was good, but I think more people would comment and stuff if you added more detail to it. Just my thoughts on the issue. I love Hiei!

roseeyes out!

I liked it, I just want to know how they kissed if she was wearing a mask...

i thought it was great

but what does ooc mean?

i know OC means original character but other than that...ooc?

I wanted to cry with Hiei! You have such a way with words!

Kgirl

I thought I was going to cry myself...That was so sweet!I personaly think he DOES have a softer side.It just can't come out very often. I think this is a side very rarely touched on, so congrats for the 9.99 on a scale of one to ten.I loved it.

You rock.

Nicely done! I've read several fics that made Hiei cry but this one's really good, the way you build up the emotions were fantastic..and yep, it isn't OOCness when it's his first time.

Nice one vhee!

Looking forward to know who's the lucky girl :3

that was a very sweet fic, one of my faves actually. i loved it and i'm a huge fan of Hiei. you captured him perfectly, i believe that's exactly how he would act in that situation. well done -x-

-squeals- it was wonderful! i loved it! just like everything else you do!

(Finally I can review this! Damn glitch)

You did an amazing job with this! I don't think a crying-Hiei is OOC because he does have the capability of crying should he be in the right situation. You made it done very well! I mean he fights it, he denies it, he is confused...you just did it extremely well!

This was amazingly emotional and well written! It was done amazingly! I loved it!

When I read something like this my chest tightens and a searing hot pain travels through it...always. And however sad, it made me laugh becasue that was the first thing I thought of too when I read a story like this.

I feel so bad for Hiei, and the unnamed girl. I wonder what happened to her...why she was in the hospital.

It was very well written and it made my heart break. I loved it and I'm wondering why this'll be the last thing you post in awhile...I wanna read more!

Oh...so emotional...I wish to know more of this mysterious lady who captured Hiei's heart so fully...Nice little one-shot story!

Hiei's first cry! _ Hiei's also embarrased, so cute!