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| -Pretty.Pretty.Butterfly- 2008-07-24 ch 2, | abusecool, it's interesting. update soon? =) |
| MistakenlyPerfect 2008-06-29 ch 2, | abusehey. I'm french, and I was reading your translations and it made me laugh. Lol. Sorry, no offense ment. But, I looked at the authors note, and I understood. For future reference, we say "Ferme la." ANYWAYS. I like the story, a lot. It's very good. I hope you update soon. |
| justifiedlover 2008-06-23 ch 2, | abuseI liked it so much! Your a really good writer.. Hope you update soon... |
| aliaslover14 2008-06-20 ch 2, | abuseAmazing. More please? |
| HiSaShUu 2008-06-13 ch 2, | abuseI love this fanfic! Especially the flashbacks, those ones really made my day. Keep up the good work! |
| Little Miss Secret 2008-06-13 ch 2, | abusehey!! I really really love your story!! Hopefully the next chapter will be posted soon!! (sry for my bad english I come from Austria!) But great story! really! |
| morningstar67 2008-06-08 ch 2, | abuseI am really liking this. Please keep it up. I am enjoying the story from Nicky's pov. |
| Frust-sheep 2008-06-08 ch 2, | abuseOh awesome chapter CrazyRodeoGirl. The scene with Nicky on her cell phone was fabulous. *lol* And I was glad that Jason was there to protect her. The scene where Nicky and Jason`s eyes met was beautiful written. I can`t wait for more, so please update soon. This is very exciting. :) |
| mhx3 2008-06-07 ch 2, | abuseI love this. Please update soon! |
| noro 2008-06-07 ch 2, | abusehope u update soon that was great so lookin forward to the next part |
| tooley 2008-06-06 ch 2, | abuseIt was good. Keep them coming. |
| angeloneous 2008-06-06 ch 2, | abuseI really like it! I can't wait to see how everything plays out. |
| texamich 2008-06-06 ch 2, | abuseOoh, Nicky kicks some butt! Taking us inside her head as she plans her strike makes it believable. I enjoyed both chapters, and am intrigued by this from ch. 1: "If she counted Berlin and Paris, where he had spared her life when he shouldn’t have, then the total came to five times." So we have a lot to catch up on... Why should he not have spared her in Berlin? You are setting up a lot here; I'll look forward to seeing how it all resolves. |
| mhx3 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseExcellent first chapter. I hope you update soon...I love this. |
| tooley 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abuseDon't worry about this being to short. It is a very good beginning and I look forward to reading more. |