I didn't think someone would come up with this, its a genius idea really. I liked it cuz u explained things well and were descriptive. keep it up!

Aw, so sweet. :3

I found your story stolen and posted here: gallery/?offset24#/d1otppg

by a person who stole one of mine and several by other authors here. I reported the theft of my story to Deviant Art. You may want to as well.

I thought you and the others should know.

Thanks,

Drivven

Wow ! That was amazing I think can truly say you are my fav author !

why is it complete, if theres more smexin?

I loved the happy ending

Good. Laugable, honestly they're both dolts.

Naruto's insecurities - that twerp think of all the action he missed out on ha ha ha but they now have to make up for.

Poor Sasuke having to put up with Kuri and Ky...I was constantly on the alert to skip a Sasuke/Ky (ew) chap but thankfully you didn't flesh them out so to speak lol :)

D: Bleh, I kind of hate the ending. I hate the Kuri/Kyuubi sex. It REALLY sucks for me. But Naruto and Sasuke for the win!

the story is very good i love it

that was so hott...omg..the fruit sex was so f*ing hott and kinky...lol...omg..that was so funny to boot..lol..

Really sweet story, almost like a fairytale. I loved it :)

That was a very cute and sweet story. Had some really funny parts!

Ahahah.

VERYY CUTE.

Lol the end. "Naruto Uchiha" xP I like how you had Naruto change his last name to Sasuke's.

The whole proposal scene at the end was very well planned out. Very "Naruto/Sasuke-ish" to have all their friends and loved ones around.

Overall, it was a pretty neat and original concept! I like how you incorporated all the different sides of Naruto- Kyuubi, Naruko, and his original self.

AW! I was lmao at parts but I loved it!

Midnight Mourner

They'll never

know who I am

-hums- Omfg I loved this chap...

Midnight Mourner

They'll never

know who I am