Reviews for A Spark Neglected

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hio 2008-06-13 ch 10, anon.	abusegreat chapter
Cascaper 2008-06-12 ch 10,	abuseAnd with a final flashback we end this lurvely drama. Well, maybe lovely isn't really the word considering what happened to Plato...No, never mind, it is the right word. After all, Plato got a little love before he died, and Vicki & Misto got the Mating Dance they'd always dreamed of. I love how Grizabella's like the only mother figure Demeter's ever really had, and she still thinks of her to this day. It was one of the sweetest parts of the whole story. One last question: Please tell me you have more ficness involving Satis, Tugger and Bomba. I want to know more about that little kit and her parents. She sounds like a lot of fun!
Cascaper 2008-06-12 ch 9,	abuseFunny how you can love two guys, know you love one more, and yet be upset when the other leaves you (whether through death or not)...That's one of the best things about this fic. How Victoria loves both Plato and Misto- the latter best- but she's still really upset when the former dies. It's so...dare I say it...human. Le gasp! But your battle scenes are fine. I wish mine were more chaotic. Shifting the narrative camera only gets me so far.
madicullen 2008-06-11 ch 10,	abusewait...its over?!? NO! Plz sequal. Twas good tho...otherwise i wouldnt want a sequel, but yea plz write more. i was getting used to the routine of checking 4 ur story every wednesday and sunday! -madicullen
Cascaper 2008-06-11 ch 8,	abuseI know. At least she finally burst his bubble, but what's he gonna do to Misto now? Oh dear...bites fist a la Prince Edward in "Enchanted" Just as I thought- yay for more Tugger goodness. And jeeze, Mac, you're that upset over losing Bomb and Deme so long ago? Villains sure know how to carry a grudge.
Cascaper 2008-06-11 ch 7,	abuseCatnip, of course it's exciting. Hooray for leaving Tugger speechless- I LOVE the way you write him. It's, as I once told another fave author of mine, as if you've known all of them for years on end. Or been lurking in a well-camouflaged spot with a camcorder, again for years. Heehee. Onward (hopefully to more Tugger goodness!)
Cascaper 2008-06-11 ch 6,	abuseI know, I always want to say, "No, I'm a Cat, have been for years, didn't you know?" And back to the story. So THAT'S why Griz got kicked out. Poor Munku, heartbroken at eleven...He needed a hug then didn't he? Well, Dem can give him one from me.
Queen Em 2008-06-11 ch 10,	abuseI can assure you it was indeed very enjoyable to read. The last chapter was perfect, you really summed up the feelings and how they were all missing brave Plato. The characterization, especially Demeter, Tugger and Misto, was fantastic. It was an original idea and the flashbacks were very interesting and a clever technique. I really hope you write another story, if you do get a chance I would love to hear what you think of my Cats fan fiction "One Step at a Time", yours was so great, I'd love your feedback Queen-Em x
Queen Em 2008-06-11 ch 9,	abuseSorry I'm a bit late replying but at least I have another chapter to read! That was brilliant, I like that you focused more on the characters than the fight. Poor Vicotria, at least Misto is there. I hope Dem doesn't push Munk away though, and yay for Tugger being a hero for once! Off to read the next chapter!
irishdancerfromroi 2008-06-11 ch 10,	abuseIt was quite enjoyable to read! Well...chapter nine was sad (I don't want to put spoilers into the review, just in case). I called it, though! Hah. It was sad, but very good. Very well written - all of your stuff is. (As I said in my first review, I'm an awful person who reads and forgets to review.) Just...kind of excellent! I loved it all. Would you mind if I borrow the Plato/Exotica plot-bunny, just to play around with?
Cascaper 2008-06-11 ch 5,	abuseBoring? What in the Heaviside do you mean? This story is a lot of things but 'boring' isn't and never will be one of them. So this chapter is quiet. So what? Angst cures all ills. Poor little Misto...pets him
Cascaper 2008-06-11 ch 4,	abuseEtcetera's your weapon? Ok...grin I like your theory about Grizabella being shunned for acting as Macavity's spy, but making the Jellicles take in Bomba and Deme. It's cool. And makes sense. Whee!
Cascaper 2008-06-09 ch 3,	abuseAh. The repeated dialogue and scenario did make the connection. And the last line was pretty much the best in this chapter. Go Penguin!
Cascaper 2008-06-09 ch 2,	abuseConfusing? Hardly. I quite enjoy the Grizabella flashbacks. And the capitalization on words like Cat and Promised Mate is an old-world touch that absolutely thrills me.
Cascaper 2008-06-09 ch 1,	abuseOk, screw waiting until this was complete like I was going to. It's way too good not to just review what there currently is. -That was way too confusing and I know it. But it's detailed, and the plot is fantastic, so I'm staying to review the way I always do- chapter by chapter. Onward!

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