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| Aslan's Lamb 2008-08-10 ch 1,  | abuseI love your portrayal of Bree. The insight into his character, the way he's not as cocky as he seems in the book. This line, "Because I can't stop; I'm the leader here, they're all depending on me," just shows how the burden of leadership can be so heavy at times...And then the Lion comes and brings hope. |
| Queen Su 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abuseWell done! Queen Susan the Gentle, Cair Paravel, Narnia *Aslan's Blood Never Fails Me* |
| Swanwhite2 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseThis is great Val! That's just like Bree :) The last part is so good. It's like the poem footprints. |
| MerrytheHobbit 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseWow! Awesome! Amazing story! |
| KCS 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseOh, wonderful! Very vivid - I could see it all so clearly. |
| fledge 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseKind of a prequel to How Bree Became a Wiser Horse. Very beautifully written; the "My Son" part is an amazing idea indeed, especially when the paw prints are mentioned. Fantastic description of all the impressions throughout their journey. |
| figlia del Dio 2008-05-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, I love the last line. And it seems that I share your same enthusiasms as well :) Inspiring. |
| albert12 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseInteresting! The ending reminds me of the poem "Footprints in the Sand". |
| floppyearsthebunny 2008-05-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseBrilliant Val! I love the last two lines. There splendid! |
| Monkey 2008-05-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was REALLY good. Expertly written, too. Im sure Petraverd would love this, Val. :) I need to read more of your fictions, I really do. Keep writing! And Happy birthday to the Petra-fied uni if he reads this! ~Monkey |