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La-p'tite-tete
2009-06-06 . chapter 4
So funny! ^^ I think Matt is one of my favourite characters!
FlareKnight
2009-05-10 . chapter 4
Have to say I really enjoyed this so far. Have to think this sort of event would happen sooner or later once Mattand Lucy got together. The conversation between the family would be pretty interesting. You knew she would be charging in the moment she found out that Matt was over there. Would have to think that part of the chat would be making the point that McLane's behaviour right now is part of the reason she was distant from him in the first place. Has to respect the decisions made by those two.

Overall it has been pretty funny. Like how things shift when Matt actually gets hurt and then shift again when Lucy arrives. Poor guy does have a lot of guts to be with Lucy when he knows first hand how dangerous McClane can be.

Hope you decide to update since it's a pretty nice story so far.
lynneanne
2009-04-27 . chapter 4
I see that it has been awhile since you updated this story, but hope you plan to continue.
hpluv3r
2009-04-14 . chapter 4
*sigh* continuing to await the next update =]
Ishamel
2009-04-09 . chapter 4
You made McClane a monster and Matt a **.
Just A Fan
2009-02-24 . chapter 4
Aah! I would love to see some more from you! This story is very interesting and I would like to see where it is heading! Wonderful job and keep up the great work!
WhiteTwitch
2008-11-28 . chapter 4
AMAZING! I was alternately laughing, going 'aw' at your Matt, or being scared of McClane. PLEASE write more, I'm in LOVE!
UchihaSymbol
2008-11-13 . chapter 4
That was more than 600 words but it's a good plot. PLease continue.
funkypartyweasel
2008-11-05 . chapter 4
Gah I didn't even realise this had been updated! Luckily I have an account now so it can go on my alerts! :) I love this story; Matt is the best character from Die Hard 4, and I love his interactions with McClane! I 100% agree with you- I really hope they do make a fifth movie with both of them in it...
Matt is very sweet in this fic: “I don’t cry about my dolls – no, they’re not dolls. They’re collectables.” Heh heh...and I love him "thin, scruffy and shaggy", as McClane puts it!
I hope he can show McClane that he IS right for Lucy, and that he IS capable of protecting her if she needs it! I'm guessing he will, though, so I'm happy. :)
Also, I definitely don't mind about your chapters going over 600 words- the longer the better!
wandamarie
2008-09-26 . chapter 4
it was a good one thank you
Reven Eid
2008-09-24 . chapter 4
YOU UPDATED! YAY!
achillies-eel
2008-09-22 . chapter 4
It's been a while since you updated this, and it's a pleasure to see more. I hope you keep updating!
lnlune
2008-09-21 . chapter 4
Hi, that was a very tense part, I liked it. I'm eager to read the next part.
LN
spankingfemfatale
2008-09-21 . chapter 4
aw! Poor Matt! He just can't win can he? Can't wait to see the conversation that transpires between John and Lucy out of this little debacle! LOL!

Glad to hear your all moved and your thesis is coming along! I've just got all those movies burned as well as that documentary for Batman. I plan to send it out next weekend (been kind of broke after DC :P)

*kisses!*
supergirl3684
2008-09-21 . chapter 4
that was great!! Personally, i'm glad you broke the 600 words or less rule! so much fun!! Poor Matt...
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